Constance La France Poet Villanelle

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Meditation - Vision

 
In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy,
The corridors are full of whispers calling;
I open a door to a land green and steamy.

It seems a thousand birds are in trees leafy,
Their wild sonorous song like violins whining;
In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy.

I walk a dream forest and my mind goes freely,
All about is enchantment surreal and twining;
I open a door to a land green and steamy.

Lush tendrils reach out with fingers thorny,
And murmurous hummingbirds glide stunning;
In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy.

Lovely flowers in every hue seem so sleepy,
Oh the butterflies are so colorful and dazzling;
I open a door to a land green and steamy.

This arcane dream so eerie with winds breezy,
My journey gorgeous, divine and winding;
In my mind the gallery is vast and dreamy,
I open a door to a land green and steamy.

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April 28, 2016

Poetry/Villanelle/Meditation - Vision
Copyright Protected, ID 16-783-448-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

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Beautiful Scars October 20, 2016 at 7:55 AM Love this form and love this poem, you are the queen of amazing forms lovely Broken Wings....congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Tom Quigley April 29, 2016 at 1:02 PM Beautifully done! A wonderful imaginative voyage. :-) Constance La France April 29, 2016 at 2:00 PM Tom, thank you so much for the beautiful and the wonderful ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2016 at 3:05 PM - Sounds delicious, beautiful written B.W. -#7- Luck in contest - hugs // Sun :) Constance La France April 28, 2016 at 3:24 PM Sunshine, thanks for the beautiful and the 7 ~~

Eileen Manassian April 28, 2016 at 12:19 PM This is a lovely piece, Broken Wings. One wishes to be with you on the journey and to see with your eyes...all the marvels. Good luck in the contest. Constance La France April 28, 2016 at 12:35 PM Eileen, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment ~~

Barry Stebbings April 28, 2016 at 10:57 AM Lovely piece. To open a door to a vivid imagination is to find another world. Well done. Constance La France May 3, 2016 at 11:38 PM Barry, thanks for the lovely and the compliment

Jill Spagnola April 28, 2016 at 10:52 AM Constance, I love this form for you! Thank you for giving me a peek inside your imagination:), jill Constance La France May 3, 2016 at 11:42 PM Jill, I like the form also, and thanks for the visit ~!!!