Meditation

Reciting Our Father
like a sugar-coated Vicar, I glide into
the silence of a cross, standing
before me, like a 95 year old
cactus, watching people walk-by

A wind breezes in,
and I dream I were this wind,
dancing freely with
the sand dunes of time

I can’t stop wondering
why inside this temple
has a repetitive silence, unlike
in the flea market where most
souls enjoy a colorful day


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First published online and in-print 
in Shabdaguchha, An International Poetry Journal 
Issue 43/44: January - June, 2009: Volume 11 No 3/4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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July 10, 2009 at 12:01 AM
Otsenre, congrats on your feature...Raul
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July 6, 2009 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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July 6, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Otsenre. Congratulations on it be published. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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July 5, 2009 at 11:18 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. God bless and more power. Ernilando
Spence Sr Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 5:17 PM
Hello E, meditation requires mindfulness. Like the cactus, while producing food for the soul who knows where to find it, so does the essence of meditation. The mind must dance freely upon realizing such knowledge. Thanks for the wonderful blog comment regarding my book. God bless always! ~J
Shango Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Excellent contrast between verse 2 and verse 4 of stanza 3 ... powerful last stanza that brings closure to the thought ... awesome write, my friend.
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May 10, 2009 at 5:31 PM
So powerful. I always awe at the depth you achieve in your poetry, and always leaves that wondering after-effect. I have so missed reading your poetry my friend. My best to you. ~ Charlie
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May 10, 2009 at 8:09 AM
wonderful-souls enjoy a colourful day--what a rainbow--charma
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