medieval mug

this mugs home is its castle

and hot cocoa a vassal

some marshmallows float

its chocolate moat

with seldom fuss or hassle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lane Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Hi Richard. It's not cool to label a man's write as adorable, but in the case of your limerick... it's what came to mind. I agree with every word.
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December 9, 2023 at 2:00 AM
Whatever works! We never know when or what will be a source of inspiration.
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December 8, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Thank you Lin. It began with two words castle and vassal. They rhymed and happened to have a similar relevance. The rest was easy. :)
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