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medieval mug

this mugs home is a castle

and hot cocoa a vassal

its marshmallows float

a chocolate moat

with seldom fuss or hassle.

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Lin Lane

Date: 12/8/2023 6:54:00 AM

Hi Richard. It's not cool to label a man's write as adorable, but in the case of your limerick... it's what came to mind. I agree with every word.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/9/2023 2:00:00 AM

Whatever works! We never know when or what will be a source of inspiration.

Richard Breese
Date: 12/8/2023 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Lin. It began with two words castle and vassal. They rhymed and happened to have a similar relevance. The rest was easy. :)