Meant To Be

You and I were probably Never meant to be, But every second spent with you I’ll love for eternity Russell Sivey

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Date: 6/27/2012 9:05:00 PM

A sweet piece with superb cadence and rhyming. Well done Russell! Best wishes, Keith

Date: 6/26/2012 4:52:00 PM

beautiful sweetness of the hour, when i was loved an in your power, butterfly she flew away...

Date: 6/26/2012 6:58:00 AM

Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Date: 6/26/2012 2:56:00 AM

you gently weave lines of romance with rich brevity, russell... love the contrast approach... well done, my friend! :) huggs!

Date: 6/25/2012 9:21:00 PM

i do love the rhyme mate, it works well 4 me, id claim it meself:)

Date: 6/25/2012 9:17:00 PM

Short and sweet, but also a lovely verse. I like this Russell! Love, Kim

Date: 6/25/2012 8:57:00 PM

I LOVE This one of yours. It's got excellent flow with rhyme plus the message is very succinctly stated . Very cool short rhyme.