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Meandering

Meandering a speechless glee allowing the dust of purpose a cleansing breath shedding the garment of time playing hide and seek with your shadow no past – no future only lazy footsteps guiding you in a wanderer’s waltz 9/17/2021 “M” Contest, New Poems Only – Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/16/2021 3:23:00 PM
Well written congrats on a much deserved win!
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Date: 10/9/2021 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It really captured the essence of meandering so well. I would love to simply 'meander' like this for awhile!
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:35:00 AM
Ohhhh I love this sparkling gem filled with amazing images - "speechless glee," "dust of purpose," "Playing hide and seek with your shadow." You have really captured the essence of meandering and enjoying each step of the waltz. Your imagery is unique and fresh. Congratulations John. This is a fav for me.
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Date: 9/22/2021 2:44:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Life is a waltz with both good and bad in it. Have a blessed day.......................
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:56:00 AM
succinct and deep, John. I really like this because it packs a wallop!
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:02:00 AM
Loved your take in this contest using Meandering as your theme... "shedding the garment of time.. "... beautiful... Best wishes John... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/18/2021 2:17:00 AM
This is so cool. Love your choice of words, John Best wishes in the contest. Panagiota
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Date: 9/18/2021 1:20:00 AM
Live the aliterative last line John.Have a creative weekend
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Date: 9/17/2021 4:40:00 PM
Hello John ... I think many of us suffer the wanderer's waltz. I certainly enjoyed your poetic description John - Lindsay
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