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Meadow In Autumn

Standing at the fence row on the far side of the meadow I am fascinated by the movement of an encroaching shadow Changing forms, reminding me of the fictional shapeshifter On the other side of the meadow lurks a slovenly-clad drifter I do not know him, but he does not live in my neighborhood So, I keep an eye on him as he slips down into the near wood The flowers are gone, and the tall grasses are drooping badly Awaiting coming blasts from the north, I think, not so gladly When they will slink beneath the snowy white lacy blankets To await the coming of spring; for now they wait, no regrets And I mosey on to get my last look at the autumn color fading Most of the leaves have fallen and the shadows are cascading
written October 26, 2021

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Date: 10/28/2021 9:23:00 PM
Your metaphoric imagery is inspiring.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/29/2021 9:54:00 AM
Caren, when I finished this poem, I realized the influence you've had on my writing. This is one of the longest line poems I've written, and the rhymes just seems to appear out of nowhere. Thank you!
Date: 10/28/2021 4:49:00 AM
Love your images Milton! I agree with you about the snow! i don't miss it, I'll look a pretty pictures of it and stay warm!!
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Date: 10/28/2021 9:48:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Mike. I'm think of starting a petition to keep the snow way up north!!!!
Date: 10/27/2021 2:12:00 AM
I love the idea of snow, perhaps this year!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/27/2021 9:09:00 AM
I don't look forward to the ice storms and snow. Supposed to be a bad winter, I understand. Do you have much snow where you live?
Date: 10/26/2021 4:23:00 PM
Vividly descriptive and expressive, Milton. I too love fall! Janice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/26/2021 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice.
Date: 10/26/2021 12:48:00 PM
Enjoyed your take on the autumn scene Milton, my favourite season without a doubt. Tom
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Date: 10/26/2021 12:55:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. I appreciated you comments, and it was an enjoyable write.

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