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6/18/2024 

 

First Place (shared) ~ Submitted to "Bio Poem Poetry Contest" sponsored by Eve Roper.

 

Inspiration for the title came from the phrase, "me oh, my oh,"  in Jambalaya, a song written and sung by Hank Williams, Sr.  He rhymes the phrase with "bayou," which he pronounces as "bio."

 

 

Pops Kind husband, vigilant father, loving son, mischievous brother Brother of Lizard and Kippie-bombs Lover of Khatabeak, Danbug and Benbot Who feels joyful, happy and satisfied Who fears giant Joro spiders, level 4 biohazards, and tsunamis Who would like to see an end to mourning, outcry and pain Resident of Fort Benjamin Hawkins, Georgia Daddy My wife sustains my life, leaves me always wanting more Just love her sweet persistence, she’s the one that I adore From her I get—action, main attraction, chain reaction From her I get—kindness, love that binds us, to remind us

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Date: 12/17/2024 9:09:00 PM
Beautiful, Mark. Carol, is all the things you mentioned and more... give her my. love.
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Date: 7/19/2024 9:20:00 AM
Dear Mark, I adore the loving and light-hearted spirit of your wonderful bio poem. So beautifully and gratefully expressed. It's a delight to know more about you, my dear poet friend. Congratulations for your win in Eve's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/19/2024 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, dear Susan. Your comments are always so gracious and kind. Congratulations, too, on your win in Eve’s contest. Your “Lyrical Daydreamer” was a delight to read.
Date: 7/14/2024 7:31:00 AM
Ahh!! Good to learn a few delights in your life. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:54:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful congratulations, Sara. I enjoyed your family-oriented “A Bio Of Me.” Write on!
Date: 7/12/2024 9:30:00 PM
Love your creative bio, Mark. It has a cool vibe and your wife sounds amazing
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Date: 7/12/2024 10:01:00 PM
Yes she is. Thank you for your cool comment, Wordwarrior Miller! Your “BIO POEM -edited” was a delight to read too. :)
Date: 7/12/2024 2:08:00 AM
Honored to know you dear happy poet. Nice poem. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/12/2024 7:35:00 AM
Hi, Thriveni. Thank you for your gracious comment.
Date: 7/11/2024 11:20:00 PM
Great title, enjoyed this Mark, well done!
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/12/2024 7:33:00 AM
Thank you, Martin. I enjoyed your “This Is Me - autobiographical verse” too. :)
Date: 6/23/2024 8:39:00 PM
the better to know you, mark! on point
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Date: 6/23/2024 11:47:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging comment, Nette!
Date: 6/23/2024 9:39:00 AM
Love seeing your bio. These are all so interesting to see from the members
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Date: 6/23/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. It really is cool seeing all of the different bios. :)
Date: 6/22/2024 6:15:00 AM
lovely bio with a lot of love & humour in it. Thanks for the place in your Eurovision contest & for the info (I was never quite sure if the bearded lady was a man...)
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Date: 6/22/2024 8:27:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious comment, Jack. I appreciate your support of my Eurovision contest with your succinct entry ;)
Date: 6/18/2024 10:59:00 PM
Creatively and cleverly put together Mark...an entertaining and heart-warming read.
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Date: 6/18/2024 11:51:00 PM
You’ve brightened my day, Paul, with your kind encouragement.
Date: 6/18/2024 10:45:00 PM
Awesome BIO! Sounds like it's good to be you.
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:51:00 PM
Sometimes ;) Thanks for the “awesome.”

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