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Silhouettes of Me and You

the morn responded with its radiance in red, tears f a l l i n g in echoes of brilliant blue- you refuted, I concluded; broke my heart instead, stardust d e s c e n d i n g in silhouettes of ME and YOU. July 21, 2018

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Date: 7/25/2018 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations Loo Loo.... on your win....beautiful love poem. SuZ
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Date: 7/24/2018 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful, sad. Well done!
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Date: 7/21/2018 5:15:00 PM
Your muse has been busy, and this poem reflects her need to make a poem beautiful. The last line is poetry personified.
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Date: 7/21/2018 11:56:00 AM
Your melancholy muse is beautiful, Laura!
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Date: 7/21/2018 11:10:00 AM
So Sadly well done...
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Date: 7/21/2018 11:07:00 AM
Very creatively sad, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:21:00 AM
I like this one, Laura. Hoping you are well:)
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