Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Silhouettes of Me and You

the morn responded with its radiance in red,

tears  f a l l i n g  in echoes of brilliant blue-
  
you refuted, I concluded; broke my heart instead,

stardust  d e s c e n d i n g  in silhouettes of ME and YOU.





July 21, 2018

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Suzanne Delaney July 25, 2018 at 4:16 AM Congratulations Loo Loo.... on your win....beautiful love poem. SuZ

Susan Gentry July 24, 2018 at 10:32 PM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful, sad. Well done!

Caren Krutsinger July 21, 2018 at 5:15 PM Your muse has been busy, and this poem reflects her need to make a poem beautiful. The last line is poetry personified.

Lyric Man July 21, 2018 at 11:56 AM Your melancholy muse is beautiful, Laura!

Charlie Smith July 21, 2018 at 11:10 AM So Sadly well done...

Janice Canerdy July 21, 2018 at 11:07 AM Very creatively sad, Luloo! Janice

Daniel Turner July 21, 2018 at 10:21 AM I like this one, Laura. Hoping you are well:)