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Me and the flea

I hate it when a flea takes a liking to me and keeps darting in front of my eyes. I try swatting it away, but she thinks it's play, and so keeps it up - until she dies.

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Date: 2/11/2025 10:27:00 AM
The poem's brevity and its use of simple, everyday language contribute to its effectiveness. It's a concise and memorable piece that effectively captures a relatable human experience with a touch of unexpected darkness. It's a clever and entertaining poem that leaves a lasting impression.
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Marinus Jansen
Date: 2/11/2025 10:59:00 AM
Thanks, for your nice comment, Joel.

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