Me and My Bike

Beneath a perpetual sky
Longing to perceive nature’s sigh,
In lanes of sparkling morning dew
Before ‘Draughton village’ we view.

Thunder lightning hoarfrost and hail
Sunbaked days when coasting the dale,
‘Bolton Abbey’ stone throw from home
Muscles taut, like a garden gnome.

West wind howling hard to face
When 'Crindles Hill’ did slow the pace,
Delightful scene when on the crest
Downward cruise gratifying rest.

This green bike bought from ‘Uncle Cliff’
Dreams fulfilled with chain driven diff,
Simple, yet it was nature’s plan
This childhood journey that began!

© Harry J Horsman  2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 11:26 PM
Nicely written poetic journey taken by you and your faithful wheels. I can certainly appreciate the appeal! Thanks for the tip to come here, Harry. Enjoy your day!
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Harry, great flow and rhyme in this nicely written poem. A big congratulations on your win in Brian's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
Kauffman Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Harry, this is just delightful - love "perpetual sky." Your images really carry the story and I love the intimate reference to "Uncle Cliff." Makes your story so personal. Congratulations as you make new memories on your "green bike."
A   Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Harry,,yup... you and your bike, a super nice win;-) Congratulations with your bicycle entry. Have a nice day~PD
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "My Bicycle" contest Harry. Love, Carol
May Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 10:58 AM
congrats on your win Harry..
Richards Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 8:30 AM
Thunder lightning hoarfrost hail ....what great lines in every way! Congratulations, Harry!
Hunter Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Congrats on your win!...a deserving piece!
Bauer Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 4:40 AM
congratulations on your win! nicely done, with some beautiful imagery.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 2:01 AM
This is great and congrats on a well deserved win xx
Williams Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Harry congrats on your win, great memory..David
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:31 PM
you know how much I loved this one. Still do! Congrats on your big win, Harry.
Johnson Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
Song Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 7:20 PM
The judges commented on the beauty of this poem and the movement of you on your bike...oh, and are your muscles really as taut as a garden gnome?...brilliant line there, Harry! Swell job! I am so glad that you wrote for this contest. Love it! Gwendolen
Song Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 7:20 PM
The judges commented on the beauty of this poem and the movement of you on your bike...oh, and are your muscles really as taut as a garden gnome?...brilliant line there, Harry! Swell job! I am so glad that you wrote for this contest. Love it! Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 8:34 PM
returning to this one. It's one of the best of the bike poems I believe!
Salama  Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 4:26 PM
So nice Harry! What a lovely description of a sweet ride ...Samia
Maverick Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Simple and magical Harry enjoyed indeed..)
Devnath  Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Everything is predetermined, Loved and enjoyed your poem, loved and loved always, bl
Susan Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 8:32 AM
I hope you made it home or to safety before that hail hit! i've heard they can get as big as softballs. also, i bet the scenery there is beautiful. i'll have to look some of those places up, but I like the carefreeness I get from this piece. sounds like a wonderful ride :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 10:40 PM
Harry, yours is one of my favorites. It is short and elegantly told. I want to write of my bike but I have so little to say, I hope I can pull it off!! By the way, the reason I said, "after 9/11" about my school poem . It's because here in the states, things got very bad after 9/11. Tourists stopped coming because the US made it hard for them to come here. So our school went from 300 students down to less than 100 in just a year or 2. It was a stressful time. We never exceeded 100 again!
Situation Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 3:29 PM
this was a nice tour and poem.
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April 24, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Hello dear poet ! TY for the great feelings ! I was one of those lads who sure did enjoy riding my bike. Now I just get to watch 'lil Noah cruising on his bike, and reading writes as yours, to take me back when I could ride without the ouch word involved ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week Harry ! Much love, james
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April 24, 2012 at 12:33 PM
Nice poem Harry....I rember my bike from my childhood but mine was red...;0) keep up the great work!!! Hugs Laila
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Nice one Harry love the "muslces taut like a garden gnome" al the best for the contest xx
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