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Me and My Bike

Beneath a perpetual sky Longing to perceive nature’s sigh, In lanes of sparkling morning dew Before ‘Draughton village’ we view. Thunder lightning hoarfrost and hail Sunbaked days when coasting the dale, ‘Bolton Abbey’ stone throw from home Muscles taut, like a garden gnome. West wind howling hard to face When 'Crindles Hill’ did slow the pace, Delightful scene when on the crest Downward cruise gratifying rest. This green bike bought from ‘Uncle Cliff’ Dreams fulfilled with chain driven diff, Simple, yet it was nature’s plan This childhood journey that began! © Harry J Horsman 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/1/2020 11:26:00 PM
Nicely written poetic journey taken by you and your faithful wheels. I can certainly appreciate the appeal! Thanks for the tip to come here, Harry. Enjoy your day!
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Date: 3/25/2020 11:22:00 PM
Harry, great flow and rhyme in this nicely written poem. A big congratulations on your win in Brian's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/25/2020 10:55:00 PM
Harry, this is just delightful - love "perpetual sky." Your images really carry the story and I love the intimate reference to "Uncle Cliff." Makes your story so personal. Congratulations as you make new memories on your "green bike."
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Date: 5/21/2012 3:51:00 PM
Harry,,yup... you and your bike, a super nice win;-) Congratulations with your bicycle entry. Have a nice day~PD
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "My Bicycle" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:58:00 AM
congrats on your win Harry..
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:30:00 AM
Thunder lightning hoarfrost hail ....what great lines in every way! Congratulations, Harry!
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win!...a deserving piece!
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:40:00 AM
congratulations on your win! nicely done, with some beautiful imagery.
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Date: 5/18/2012 2:01:00 AM
This is great and congrats on a well deserved win xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 1:25:00 AM
Harry congrats on your win, great memory..David
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:31:00 PM
you know how much I loved this one. Still do! Congrats on your big win, Harry.
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:20:00 PM
The judges commented on the beauty of this poem and the movement of you on your bike...oh, and are your muscles really as taut as a garden gnome?...brilliant line there, Harry! Swell job! I am so glad that you wrote for this contest. Love it! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:20:00 PM
The judges commented on the beauty of this poem and the movement of you on your bike...oh, and are your muscles really as taut as a garden gnome?...brilliant line there, Harry! Swell job! I am so glad that you wrote for this contest. Love it! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:34:00 PM
returning to this one. It's one of the best of the bike poems I believe!
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:26:00 PM
So nice Harry! What a lovely description of a sweet ride ...Samia
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Date: 4/25/2012 1:48:00 PM
Simple and magical Harry enjoyed indeed..)
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Date: 4/25/2012 10:01:00 AM
Everything is predetermined, Loved and enjoyed your poem, loved and loved always, bl
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Date: 4/25/2012 8:32:00 AM
I hope you made it home or to safety before that hail hit! i've heard they can get as big as softballs. also, i bet the scenery there is beautiful. i'll have to look some of those places up, but I like the carefreeness I get from this piece. sounds like a wonderful ride :)
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Date: 4/24/2012 10:40:00 PM
Harry, yours is one of my favorites. It is short and elegantly told. I want to write of my bike but I have so little to say, I hope I can pull it off!! By the way, the reason I said, "after 9/11" about my school poem . It's because here in the states, things got very bad after 9/11. Tourists stopped coming because the US made it hard for them to come here. So our school went from 300 students down to less than 100 in just a year or 2. It was a stressful time. We never exceeded 100 again!
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Date: 4/24/2012 3:29:00 PM
this was a nice tour and poem.
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Date: 4/24/2012 1:04:00 PM
Hello dear poet ! TY for the great feelings ! I was one of those lads who sure did enjoy riding my bike. Now I just get to watch 'lil Noah cruising on his bike, and reading writes as yours, to take me back when I could ride without the ouch word involved ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week Harry ! Much love, james
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Date: 4/24/2012 12:33:00 PM
Nice poem Harry....I rember my bike from my childhood but mine was red...;0) keep up the great work!!! Hugs Laila
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Date: 4/24/2012 10:24:00 AM
Nice one Harry love the "muslces taut like a garden gnome" al the best for the contest xx
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