Me & Little Sister Fishin'

Pigtails, cowboy belts and new summer jeans.
A long ride to the lake. I can't wait to get fishin'!
I have to take Sis? Mooom . . . how mean!
Hurry up little sister, there's no time to lose.
Cut a new pole, dig a can of worms,
Run out on the dock and find your own place. 

Pleading, with nose twisted,
A worm gingerly pinched between two fingers,
I finally agree to bait my pathetic sister's hook. 

The day wears on and on, hot and quiet.
Shh, Sis, or you'll scare 'em away.
No, Sis, we can't go back, we haven't caught a fish yet.
Little sister just doesn't understand the fine art of fishing. 

I said a little longer.
"But I'm hungry."
Just a little bit longer.
"But I have to gooo . . ."                                                              
Sis, please, it won't be long . . . 

YES!  . . . I caught one. Now you see! 

Angry and tired and not impressed with my catch, she pulled in her worm,
And with a quick flick of the wrist, off the hook she did pluck it.
With hands on her hips, looking me square in the eye she declared,
Anyone, who would sit out here all day for that, is dumb enough to fish in a bucket!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:25 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Meyer Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Funom. Glad you enjoyed it. It is a fun memory for me now that my sister has passed. She was always my little nemesis.
Brown Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Judith. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol
Meyer Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Thank you for your comment ... I think ... Try not to accentuate my "old country folk" side. :)
Austin Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:35 AM
"Dumb enough to fish in a bucket." This is old country folk kinda talk. Love it! Love, daver
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 10:52 PM
LOL Congratulations, Judith, for your placement in Nathan's sibling rivalry poetry contest. Very nice.
Mason Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Awesome write here, Judith. I really enjoyed this one ... would have been first in my contest ... smile ... congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest!!
Rider Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 11:33 AM
WHOOHOO! Congratulations on 3rd place tin Nathan's contest!! Love you! Tru
Gorelick Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Too funny! Congrats on your win. Barbara
Johnson Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 7:46 AM
Congratulations. This is a clever take on the contest. Joyce
Richards Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 6:33 AM
A poem to make me smile!!! Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Nathan's contest, !!!! Love, Carrie
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations for your win in Nathan's contest Judith . Love, Carol
Leccese Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 2:22 AM
Congratulations on 3rd place in my contest! Nate.
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 9:59 AM
Judith, i am chuckling reading this, written beautifully>>James
Rider Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 6:28 PM
I can just see Auntie doing this too, with her little hands on her hips! hehehe Great poem! ~Trudy~
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 5:42 AM
I have the biggest smile on my face right now. Such a beautiful write you have here Judith. Precious memories. Love, Carol
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