Me

Me Tidal wave always a slave See my grave feeling brave Feel trapped in body pain Inner child ran away Left with nothing to complain Battered soul inflicted Time running by dreams die Looking with my numb eye Sometimes beauty lingers loosely Tender loving care is hard to bare Me ponder me wander me stare Me don’t really care me very rare

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/11/2017 11:06:00 AM

Niall I understand about the TLC. Sometimes it gets to heavy with the weight of obligation to be always grateful.

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/11/2017 4:00:00 PM

Hi Patricia , so true , thank you so much for comment ::))))hugs

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/1/2017 11:11:00 AM

Your write brings forward a self introspection very nicely. Like it. :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/1/2017 1:31:00 PM

Hi Sunita , thank you for your kind comment ::))) hugs from Ireland

Darren White

Date: 7/26/2017 2:08:00 AM

I always like the way you use language in your poems. Even when the poem is serious, it can make me smile.

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/26/2017 3:37:00 AM

Hi Darren , thank you for comment , glad you enjoyed my friend :)))

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/24/2017 2:25:00 PM

I have enjoyed your poetry.We all have body pain,it is part of our life.I like the way the words rhyme. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs...

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/24/2017 2:43:00 PM

Hi Darlene , thank you for your comment :)))))hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/23/2017 6:27:00 PM

I really like this one Niall, profoundly written :) hugs and always smiley :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/24/2017 2:43:00 AM

Hi Akkina , beautiful Monday morning thank you for comment :)))) hugs smiley:)

Jean Murray

Date: 7/21/2017 4:00:00 PM

You are rare Niall. Our poems may start out with good intensions but the truth prevails. Can I just say....no need for any more George Clooney photos when you look this good.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2017 10:53:00 AM

Oh I did like the George Looney photo so please bring it back one day lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/21/2017 4:32:00 PM

Hi Jean , thanks , they say we will have sunshine for the weekend ,, lol I was holding in my belly in pic lol ,, my son calls me George looney , have a great weekend Jean :))))hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/21/2017 3:00:00 PM

- A touching poem, Niall - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/21/2017 3:04:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , thanks you for comment , hope you have a beautiful sunshine smiley huggy weekend :)))))hugs

Alona Perlin

Date: 7/21/2017 10:00:00 AM

Very poignant and full of feeling! Beautiful!!

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/21/2017 12:25:00 PM

Hi Alona , thank you for comment , happy weekend my friend :))hugs

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/21/2017 7:34:00 AM

You have expressed sadness here very well Niall. "Battered soul inflicted" I hope this is only fictional. big hugs

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/21/2017 9:24:00 AM

Hi Becca , thanks for comment and concern , I would say 50, 50 on write , your a good soul Becca thanks , have a lovely weekend :)))peace , love and hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2017 5:12:00 PM

So much emotion in your poem Niall ... 'time running by dreams die' is so true for so many of us. Great internal rhyme - thanks for sharing:-) hugs jan xx

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/20/2017 5:16:00 PM

Hi Jan , thanks for comment , I went deep with this one , I was planning on something real funny but you know what happens when you make plans ,,hehehehe ,,lol :))))))big hugs