Maybe One Day

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you’re walking on the edge of time careful not to step outside the lines you try to stay within the confines of what’s safe avoiding rain at any cost to not get wet some day you might decide to take a risk and show me bluntly how you truly feel out from behind the guiles and masquerade do away with the many veils and false charades AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on July 7, 2022

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/10/2022 3:05:00 AM

Wonderful words...love the image you chose for the poem - God bless you. Love, Gina

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2022 5:10:00 AM

Thanks, Gina ~ much appreciated

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/9/2022 8:42:00 PM

Your message resonates well with me. So many stay within the confines... though sometimes bursting barriers opens up the proverbial 'Pandora's Box.' Food for thought here, Line. ~ Digesting Now

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2022 5:11:00 AM

Yes indeed ~ excellent observation, Gershon.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/9/2022 1:15:00 PM

A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/9/2022 3:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula ~

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/9/2022 7:14:00 AM

It is sometimes very difficult to break through the barriers. It's also difficult to take the first step and take that risk. One hopes that patience wears longer than fear. Nice Line! Linda

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/9/2022 3:30:00 PM

Thanks Linda, for your much appreciated visit and comment ~