Maybe Next Time

The blue bells assume you came to save me; you're yesterday's love anyway,
A fragmented secluded infinity, no expectations, just sadness and melancholy.
Leave me now, I am exultant and proud, I retain my scrutiny,
Let us not pour fuel on to the burning wreckage no more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Shaw Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Some really nice comments here for a well written poem, Kevin xx
Stephenson Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Thank you kevin :-) x
Krutsinger Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 7:05 PM
I have not thought of bluebells for many seasons. I am glad you are exultant and proud. Well penned, Leigh.
Stephenson Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thank you for you kind words Caren. Bluebells are my favourite flower. Have a lovely day :-)
George   Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Deep and profound, Leigh. Elaine
Stephenson Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Thank you for your comment Elaine :-)
Horsman Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Wonderful and powerful poetry.
Stephenson Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Many thanks for your kind words Harry :-) X
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