Maybe I Am No Poet At All

This poem was a forest fire; it burned me up as I read it
I was supposedly the writer. 
But was I?

Voices inside me are laughing, taking credit, kicking me to the curb.
My next poem is a blizzard.
She whirls me into a whiteness.

This turns into marshmallow crème. 
I am quiet for a second, 
Landing in a drift, head first, but there is no coolness.

Snow without coldness is not a poem at all.
 It’s a fake poem like fake news.
I believe it best to give up now.

Maybe I am no poet at all but a prancing pony
Two steeds prance up. Dragging Cinderella’s coach. 
Do not use Cinderella! My muse says meanly. 

I stick out my tongue.
Cinderella, Cinderella, Cinderella.
I am easily distracted when imagination is giving me instruction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Hamilton Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 12:56 PM
What an imagination Caren, congrats on POTD
Krutsinger Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Thank you John. It was a huge honor.
Shaw Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Caren, without your imagination we just would not have the poem, so a poet you be, and a darn marvelous one at that : )
Krutsinger Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Thank you so much Indiana! I am so glad you stopped by.
One Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 11:20 AM
You are a poet and a great one too.. Congrats on POTD..
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much Silent One. This means a lot!
Sweatt Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on POTD and very unique! May God Bless you and keep you safe and your family!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:06 PM
Thank you Daniel.
Proxenos Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations Caren on POTD - you poetry is great and always so different! Blessings, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:07 PM
Thank you Jennifer. Different is what we strive for- me and my variety of personalities.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Loved the ending clincher, Caren, wondrously beautiful, my compliments on your honorable POTD -- Aloha~@William
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:15 PM
Thank you so much William!
Michael Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations Caren on POTD...Well done
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:15 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Doll Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Spot on wonderful poem, Caren. Congratulations on POTD-Well deserved!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Thank you Warren.
Smith Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 1:50 PM
The last line tied it all together, good work Caren, congratulations...
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Thank you Charlie
Callus Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 1:41 PM
I love your sense of humour, Caren:) A delight to read. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Thank you Paul.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Wow, Caren! With imagery and humor abound, you have described so perfectly how I have felt (and I'm sure most poets) many times over. Congrats on POTD! a fave....Blessings, Rhonda xx
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Thank you so much Rhonda.
Sands Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:17 PM
Thank you Heidi
Watt Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Caren, this is dreamy, fun, and clever, something many poets wonder about. So happy to see you honored with POTD, congratulations!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:17 PM
Thank you John.
Sweatt Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 8:42 AM
I love your poem. It was very good and congratulations for POTD! God Bless you!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Thank you Daniel.
Wanter Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 8:14 AM
Absolutely delightful! Congratulations!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Thank you Sunlight.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 7:35 AM
A big congratulations, my friend! Your imagination by heaps and bounds a-muse-ing!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:19 PM
Thank you Kim. This was so totally unexpected!
Gilmour Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 11:12 PM
Hurrah dear Caren for a well deserved POTD for you are the most fabulous poet my friend. Many congrats! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Thank you Ann. I was thrilled to death for this honor.
Wolf Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Hey, back again, jumping on the bandwagon to congratulate you on POTD, Caren! Happy for you! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 10:41 PM
Thank you my friend! I am shocked you could get on this site yesterday. I could not!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:31 PM
Lol. I love the humor in this piece. I think we may all relate to this happening at one time or another Caren. Congratulations on having this honored with POTD! xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:54 PM
Thank you so much!
Nicole Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 7:45 PM
You have such a Wonderful Imagination. :) This is cute, clever and creative. I love everything about it. You are an amazing poetess. Truly. Congratulations Caren, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:54 PM
Thank you Brandy!
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 2:42 PM
good one, Caren, congratulations on POTD
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:54 PM
Thank you Eve!
Kauffman Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Caren, your muse must be named Whimsy. But, beneath all of that whimsy is depth - a peek into the mind of a poet - yes poet - and the process of creating poetry. I do love your last line and most creative imagery. Congratulations on your POTD.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thank you Sam
Mcgee Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Another great poem from a wonderfully creative poetess. congrats on your POTD!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thankyou Jeanne
Cholt Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Every writer doubts themselves from time to time. Let our doubts spur us onto greater things.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thank you WA
Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. So Cute and you are a poet. Your last line, "I am easily distracted when imagination is giving me instruction." is priceless. Enjoy your win and day................
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 9:11 PM
Thank you Paula
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace