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Maybe, After All

How many hearts break before the dream is over? Whatever happens to those who refuse to fall? Can passion protect those who finally surrender? How can we heal the wounds after the fall? Maybe, Love is meant for us, after all. ................................. Contest: Enter the 7 line maxPoetry Contest Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/3/2016 2:12:00 PM

I like your deep lyrical musing. Never read you before, but after you expressed such kindness and feedback to everyone who entered your contest, the door opened and I saw you there for the first time. It's amazing who and what we see and where and when it happens! I enjoyed your couplets posted prior to this for Gren's and LuLoo's contest, respectively. On to more... CayCay

Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 6:45:00 AM

Thank you, CayCay. Your comments are insightful and appreciated. I'll be sure to read more of your work as well! Jesse

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2016 10:54:00 PM

oh this is so nice. Love how you ended it!!

Jesse Day
Date: 6/30/2016 11:28:00 AM

Thank you and thanks for reading!