Maybe, After All

How many hearts break before the dream is over? 
Whatever happens to those who refuse to fall? 
Can passion protect those who finally surrender? 
How can we heal the wounds after the fall? 
Maybe, Love is meant for us, after all.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 2:12 PM
I like your deep lyrical musing. Never read you before, but after you expressed such kindness and feedback to everyone who entered your contest, the door opened and I saw you there for the first time. It's amazing who and what we see and where and when it happens! I enjoyed your couplets posted prior to this for Gren's and LuLoo's contest, respectively. On to more... CayCay
Day Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Thank you, CayCay. Your comments are insightful and appreciated. I'll be sure to read more of your work as well! Jesse
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 10:54 PM
oh this is so nice. Love how you ended it!!
Day Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Thank you and thanks for reading!
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