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May Lilacs Linger Everlastingly

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May lilacs linger everlastingly in dreams he dreams of me. Whenever he, by chance, is in a pitch black room alone, may he recall the scent of my cologne. As long as I can write sweet poetry, may lilacs linger everlastingly. May he recall our love song slowly playing; how we danced, pressed together, swaying. And may he still remember my warm breath against his cheek. Beyond his very death, may lilacs linger everlastingly the same way he stays in my memory. Oh, may he not forget - when shadows fall - our kisses in the dark. We had it all! My darling man, may he remember me. May lilacs linger everlastingly written Dec. 31, 2015 Now For the For the Best Love Poem #4 Poetry Contest of PD

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Date: 2/18/2016 1:58:00 PM
Hi Andrea, a most gentle Love poem of dreams delight. The words paint such tender images in the mind. This one deserves a seven. An excellent Love poem. Have a good day....Vlad.
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:18:00 PM
PFT members would love this as I do Andrea. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I have to catch up on your poems here. That week I was away with company I got really far behind. #7
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:36:00 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:09:00 PM
Andrea Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:50:00 AM
Poetry at its best. I thoroughly enjoyed each line, embraced each stanza ... CayCay
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Date: 1/8/2016 5:10:00 PM
Hello Andrea... I always know that I'm never going to be disappointed when I read your work - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 1/6/2016 10:24:00 AM
Hi sweetie! You sure made this flow effortlessly-- you worked that line wonderfully (plus I liked the alliteration), and what I liked about it is how for me, it didn't come across as being redundant and forced/out of place, despite the repetition-- sorry can't explain properly, but I hope you know what I mean...this I think can be the danger of repetition, but for you --nope, of course this was a breeze! Sorry I owe you big time (I keep saying that!) sending you hugs!!
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Date: 1/5/2016 4:56:00 AM
Another wonderful write, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement in the combination of three words contest. T.J
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:21:00 AM
ANDREA, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:21:00 PM
Lovely write Andrea, congrats on your win
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Date: 1/3/2016 2:22:00 PM
What sweet verse! I hope you comment on Hate Talk of mine - one has yet! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:51:00 PM
Romantic!Congrats on your win, Andrea!
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:11:00 AM
Andrea.."As long as I can write sweet poetry, may lilacs linger everlastingly."..my favorite line in the stanza, thank you for your participation in my contest...be blessed -luloo
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Date: 1/2/2016 6:00:00 PM
So romantic and the words seem to sing to me.
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Date: 1/2/2016 5:15:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. I have never tired this form. Perhaps in the New Year, I will venture to try some new forms.
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Date: 1/2/2016 3:00:00 PM
alone & cologne - love it. Beautiful write indeed, Andrea x
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Date: 1/2/2016 1:27:00 PM
I've come to find that you are a romantic at heart with a subtle passionate sense that drips like honey my poetic friend...good luck..you should do well
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:18:00 AM
What a sweet and aromatic lullaby of the heart for the one whose presence linger in our soul! Excellent dear Andrea! A seven! happy New Year.
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:15:00 AM
Wow! wonderful write Andrea
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:08:00 AM
Lilacs the flower represent first love..How fiting to use in this work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2016 9:19:00 AM
My dear, this is one of your best! The form fits perfectly. BG
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Date: 1/2/2016 8:10:00 AM
Andrea, BEAUTIFUL, I love your Kyreille 7, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 1/2/2016 6:19:00 AM
hauntingly beautiful Andrea good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2016 2:58:00 AM
Hope this does well in the contest Andrea, images are blooming freshly along the lines you have wrought so well here.'
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