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May I Have This Dance

Let me hold you dear in pursuit of life’s whole dance each step perfection each smile a contrast of love made on earth yet in heaven. © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Joseph May

Date: 3/28/2013 1:12:00 PM

very lovely tanka Harry...best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2012 5:02:00 AM

wow, now here is a very sweet and romantic tanka I had somehow missed. It's always great to find a new poem on this page five of yours!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2011 1:39:00 PM

Harry soup mail...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 10:36:00 AM

Any woman would love to dance with a man who views life as you do, Harry. Lead the way to the dance floor. Wishing you success in Barbara's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Beam

Date: 2/5/2011 8:34:00 PM

thanks for comments have not been on here lately I like the way you write hope to read more

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/5/2011 1:01:00 PM

very lovely! Best of luck in the contest:) Harry, Thanks for your kind comments on "untitled one' and 'haiku for all seasons'!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2011 11:02:00 PM

Yes you may... lol,, enjoyed,..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2011 1:52:00 PM

I'm picturing you and your good lady at the Blackpool Ballroom Harry. Good luck in the contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 1:12:00 PM

Play on, Meistro, and lead me to the dance floor. A perfect tanka for the contest, Harry. I'm sure Barbara will love it as well. Love and best wishes always, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/4/2011 10:54:00 AM

beautiful poem....snowball is my new puppy he is a boy....my son named him because of his color. He is more like a blizzard full of fury.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/4/2011 7:04:00 AM

Beautifully done Tanka. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 6:21:00 AM

Simply engaging lines Harry luv... who can resist this one .. and the emotional invitation it presents.. good luck in BG's contest luv.. a definite YES from the "Sweetheart" ...

Diane Christian

Date: 2/4/2011 3:56:00 AM

aww whata nice devotional poem, I like dancing LOL, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane

Anthony Nutter

Date: 2/4/2011 3:20:00 AM

Excellent write Harry, enjoyed the read.....