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Alone, in Paris The flowers sing Le jardin du Luxembourg I look at all the pretty ladies Which one of them pray tell Is you The one who wishes for that sweet caress The one whose painting hangs on the wall The one who knows beauty runs deeper Than a river running to kiss the oceans swell The grandest of castles with candles dim There in the damp night would bonds begin If only you would listen to my whispers deep Forgiving the scars I have suffered As in the night I have wept Napoleon marched forth across great lands I the knight have lesser demands If only you, whoever you are Would take hold of me As we dance away our eternities Sur le pont de Avignon Where the river flows Like poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/5/2015 8:37:00 AM
I love the flow and the dreamy scenes it conjures.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/7/2015 12:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Agona
Date: 9/19/2015 1:45:00 PM
This is truly beautiful, Arthur. I love how the imagery just creates this romantic atmosphere!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/3/2015 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, I rather liked this one myself so appreciate all the kind comments!
Date: 9/4/2015 11:16:00 PM
Oh, I fogot to mention I am fav'ing this and giving it a well deserved 7 my friend!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2015 11:57:00 PM
And now I must double thank you!!!!! hugs!
Date: 9/4/2015 11:15:00 PM
Arthur, your first two lines conjures the imagery of romance and the remainder does not disappoint. This lovely poem touched my romantic heart and I am always searching for poetry such as this. I bow to your talents, radiant in this piece!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2015 11:56:00 PM
You are just too too kind, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Date: 9/3/2015 8:06:00 AM
Arthur, your words makes the ladies swoon--now if some lady jumps over the moon and you catch her then Cupid's arrow has hit its correct mark! A7
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/22/2015 6:18:00 PM
My friend, surely you jest. Or you are ignoring the many to find just the one.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/3/2015 11:22:00 PM
I cant even get 1 to swoon! LOL for me it seems its all doom and gloom!
Date: 9/1/2015 9:16:00 AM
This poem was innovative, captivating, and romantic in character. The story line flows smoothly and sets the pace for this poem. The theme is maintained throughout the poem and the imagery is very good. Emile. #7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/3/2015 11:21:00 PM
You as usual are very kind, thank you Emile!
Date: 8/31/2015 2:36:00 PM
ohh, i drool over this, arthur.. you speak like a knight.. that lady is yours!.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/31/2015 8:53:00 PM
Thank you Nette :)
Date: 8/31/2015 3:47:00 AM
You have all the ladies swooning Arthur.... She is there for you. You just haven't noticed yet
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/31/2015 8:52:00 PM
LOL where? where? where?
Date: 8/31/2015 3:12:00 AM
You are a romantic man, Arthur....That's for sure. This is a sweet sweet piece. LOVED the last give lines...Hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/31/2015 8:52:00 PM
Thank you , thought you would like this one!
Date: 8/31/2015 2:33:00 AM
Oh Arthur..this is so beautiful..Magmifique!!!: ) A favourite !
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/31/2015 8:51:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine! :)
Date: 8/31/2015 1:26:00 AM
WOW - absolutely stunning Arthur creative genius my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/31/2015 8:50:00 PM
thanks a million Jan!!

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