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May I Caress Your Heart

Alone, in Paris
The flowers sing
Le jardin du Luxembourg
I look at all the pretty ladies
Which one of them pray tell 
Is you
The one who wishes for that sweet caress
The one whose painting hangs on the wall
The one who knows beauty runs deeper
Than a river running to kiss the oceans swell
The grandest of castles with candles dim
There in the damp night would bonds begin
If only you would listen to my whispers deep
Forgiving the scars I have suffered
As in the night I have wept
Napoleon marched forth across great lands
I the knight have lesser demands
If only you, whoever you are
Would take hold of me
As we dance away our eternities
Sur le pont de Avignon
Where the river flows
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Apell Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 8:37 AM
I love the flow and the dreamy scenes it conjures.
Vaso Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:57 AM
Thank you so much Agona
Deschler Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 1:45 PM
This is truly beautiful, Arthur. I love how the imagery just creates this romantic atmosphere!
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Thank you, I rather liked this one myself so appreciate all the kind comments!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Oh, I fogot to mention I am fav'ing this and giving it a well deserved 7 my friend!
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 11:57 PM
And now I must double thank you!!!!! hugs!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Arthur, your first two lines conjures the imagery of romance and the remainder does not disappoint. This lovely poem touched my romantic heart and I am always searching for poetry such as this. I bow to your talents, radiant in this piece!
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 11:56 PM
You are just too too kind, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Lindley Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Arthur, your words makes the ladies swoon--now if some lady jumps over the moon and you catch her then Cupid's arrow has hit its correct mark! A7
Lindley Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 6:18 PM
My friend, surely you jest. Or you are ignoring the many to find just the one.
Vaso Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 11:22 PM
I cant even get 1 to swoon! LOL for me it seems its all doom and gloom!
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 9:16 AM
This poem was innovative, captivating, and romantic in character. The story line flows smoothly and sets the pace for this poem. The theme is maintained throughout the poem and the imagery is very good. Emile. #7
Vaso Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 11:21 PM
You as usual are very kind, thank you Emile!
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:36 PM
ohh, i drool over this, arthur.. you speak like a knight.. that lady is yours!.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Thank you Nette :)
Smith Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 3:47 AM
You have all the ladies swooning Arthur.... She is there for you. You just haven't noticed yet
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:52 PM
LOL where? where? where?
Manassian Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 3:12 AM
You are a romantic man, Arthur....That's for sure. This is a sweet sweet piece. LOVED the last give lines...Hugs
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Thank you , thought you would like this one!
Chircop Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:33 AM
Oh Arthur..this is so beautiful..Magmifique!!!: ) A favourite !
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Thank you Charmaine! :)
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 1:26 AM
WOW - absolutely stunning Arthur creative genius my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:50 PM
thanks a million Jan!!
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