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May 1st 1957

It was 50 degrees in Carrolton the moment I took my first breath of air At 8:40 PM he slapped my ass Dr. Smith said to mom, “well lookie there” It’s a boy to add to your collection of crying kids that will need to be fed Mama took one look and with a big smile “well now I do declare” was all she said That miracle of childbirth set my place as the fourteenth child and the seventh son Forever known as just one of them kids of Arlie and Sylvia Brotherton Now that’s what my birth certificate states but over the next twenty years or such I would swear I had to be switched at birth Cause I didn’t fit in with that crowd much I know there were many times in my life my parents would become true believers that though I looked somewhat like all the rest there was no way I was their son either

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Date: 3/1/2024 5:56:00 PM
Thanks for sharing a little Bio with us Jerry. That's quite a big family you were a part of, my friend. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Bill
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Date: 2/29/2024 4:30:00 PM
wow, that's a huge family! Hard to find one's place in a 'crowd.' What a challenge for you. I was sort of the 'odd man out' in my family. Surrounded by brothers and lived in a neighborhood of all boys. To this day I have trouble relating to 'girls.' :-) Were you by chance born in Carrollton, Texas? Just curious. Fabulous poem and story. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/29/2024 5:56:00 PM
Sorry, born and raised in good ole Missouri.
Date: 2/29/2024 11:58:00 AM
- Fourteen children... woow... many mouths to feed - Sad that you felt you weren't one of them - A great poem, Jerry :) - hugs
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/29/2024 5:55:00 PM
Each one of us at one time or another felt the same way. It's hard to find your own identity sometimes in a family that large.
Date: 2/28/2024 7:43:00 PM
Astonishing story, Jerry. A huge WOW from this reader. How'd you survive it all, man?!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/29/2024 5:53:00 PM
I'm Batman. Oh wait, that's another story.

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