May

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Downy clouds, hot air Balloons, panoramic plains Everywhere, lilies

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Heidi Sands

Date: 5/4/2018 9:20:00 AM

Very nice Michelle! I enjoyed this :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/4/2018 3:30:00 PM

so glad to hear it, Heidi!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/1/2018 2:45:00 PM

Painted first of May in perfect hues dear, Michelle!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/4/2018 3:30:00 PM

Thank you for such a kind comment, take care-

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/1/2018 9:19:00 AM

Feel like I’m flying with this one! I went on an amusement park ride (Universal) where you would see and smell fields as you flew over them. This reminds me! <3 Lovely!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 12:42:00 PM

That must have been it! I loved that ride!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/1/2018 1:41:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! I also went on a ride like that which simulated hand gliding (wonder if it was the same one?)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2018 8:30:00 AM

lovely imagery Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/1/2018 9:16:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Jan!

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/1/2018 8:24:00 AM

It's here... and there will be a lot more lilies everywhere...Good imagery...

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/1/2018 9:16:00 AM

Hi Arturo, thanks you for kind comment, have a great May Day!