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she stood, staff in hand ... staring down at the man kneeling before her - strands of her hair danced on the breeze like a stallion's tail ... cinnamon skin, a stunning contrast to her brilliant white riding robes ... sandals strapped in crisscross up to her knees - toes and fingers painted to match the jewel to be given her, and a wide purple sash marked with her family crest - a crest that many of her kin had died protecting. This ... was her moment, true - a moment she had been preparing for her entire life ... tireless hours and countless trials endured, spent in the grooming and educational endeavors - a lifetime of the artistic, physical, and intellectual disciplines required ... the extraordinary skills needed to lead a country, and she had taken it as seriously as any that had come before ... it was her way, to be the best ... at everything ... now, that conviction to excellence had brought her here, and due to her father's untimely passing, much sooner than expected. His prayer done, the priest looked up for her winking approval, then stood, holding the simple crown in both hands ... he tenderly placed it - a single wide, plain gold band with one large Tanzanite pear, dangling ... the exquisite violet-blue gem dancing on her forehead ... shimmering like the Merelani Hills in the bright noontime sun - the shining, resplendent symbol to all the land, of the binding promise she thus made: to be an oasis of prosperity, benevolence, and peace for all - the fierce but compassionate ruler of the desert sands ... river unto her people ... queen ... of the Sahara.

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Date: 4/7/2021 6:46:00 AM
Wow....this was mesmerising Gregory....Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/4/2021 1:50:00 PM
A gripping write with such striking imagery throughout, Greg:-) You're a true poetry wizard, my friend. Happy Easter!
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Date: 3/30/2021 5:42:00 PM
My dear friend, this is by any true standard a great masterpiece! To me it is as if a great, golden and world renowned master poet of old composed this gem! So truly touched both heart and mind! Especially so to any that have read of the darkness, death and horrors of that truly hideous and evil war. I must say Bravo to such a heartfelt and poetic masterpiece! A true gem and a fav.. God bless..
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Date: 3/29/2021 6:20:00 AM
Tears in my eyes as I read this Greg. A long past due tribute to the "war to end all wars". Masterfully written and painfully poignant.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/29/2021 9:07:00 PM
Thank you SO very kindly, John, this means a great deal to me, and I'm pleased that you took the time to read this rather long piece and comment, (I get very few these days). I pray you are well, and I hope you'll stop by again, my friend. Blessings!

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