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MATERIALISTIC A MIST or ICE on a TRAIL, will not stop a MATERIALISTIC Person who loves to shop, without paying heed to the cost of purchase, buys for desire and greed An automaton autocratically authorizes Avant-Garde accessories. John Derek Hamilton December 16,2015 2nd Place

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:08:00 AM

Brilliant take John n a great win.. big congrats!

John Hamilton
Date: 12/22/2015 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Dr. much appreciated.

Lu Loo

Date: 12/21/2015 11:55:00 AM

John... *love* this!! Congrats on your well deserved placement :) *smiles*-luloo

John Hamilton
Date: 12/21/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thanks Laura had to get out the dictionary on this one!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/21/2015 11:52:00 AM

This excellent piece was very cleverly conceived and written! Congratualtions, John, on your wonderful win! Pandita

John Hamilton
Date: 12/21/2015 1:58:00 PM

Thanks Pandita it was fun!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 8:01:00 AM

Compulsive shopping could become a financial burden, John, but it has brought you a lovely win!! Congratulations! ** paul

John Hamilton
Date: 12/21/2015 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Paul, creates a cycle of purchase, elation, disappointment, dissatisfaction, purchase...on and on. Looking forward to your entry in my paradise contest...you would do well no doubt!