John Hamilton Poet Alliteration

Materialistic

MATERIALISTIC

           A MIST or ICE on a TRAIL, will not stop a MATERIALISTIC
           Person who loves to shop, without paying heed
           to the cost of purchase, buys for desire and greed
      An automaton autocratically authorizes Avant-Garde accessories.








John Derek Hamilton
December 16,2015
2nd Place

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:08 AM Brilliant take John n a great win.. big congrats! John Hamilton December 22, 2015 at 10:42 PM Thanks Dr. much appreciated.

Beautiful Scars December 21, 2015 at 11:55 AM John... *love* this!! Congrats on your well deserved placement :) *smiles*-luloo John Hamilton December 21, 2015 at 1:59 PM Thanks Laura had to get out the dictionary on this one!

Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 11:52 AM This excellent piece was very cleverly conceived and written! Congratualtions, John, on your wonderful win! Pandita John Hamilton December 21, 2015 at 1:58 PM Thanks Pandita it was fun!

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 8:01 AM Compulsive shopping could become a financial burden, John, but it has brought you a lovely win!! Congratulations! ** paul John Hamilton December 21, 2015 at 8:27 AM Thanks Paul, creates a cycle of purchase, elation, disappointment, dissatisfaction, purchase...on and on. Looking forward to your entry in my paradise contest...you would do well no doubt!

Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 7:44 AM Congratulations on your win! John Hamilton December 21, 2015 at 8:22 AM Thanks Susan always appreciated!

Sandra Haight December 20, 2015 at 8:20 PM Back to congratulate you on your fine win, John! Sandra John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 9:50 PM Thanks Sandra was a fun one, very challenging.

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:30 PM glad to see you on the list, John. Congrats for your fine win. John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 9:49 PM Thanks Andrea was fun one!

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:48 PM john, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 9:48 PM Thanks Linda very kind!

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:31 AM JOHN, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 9:47 PM Thanks SKAT your always there for us. Thank you!

Sandra Haight December 20, 2015 at 9:02 AM Nicely done and very complex, together with words of wisdom, John. I now this will do well in the contest! Sandra John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 9:45 PM Thanks Sandra

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2015 at 7:23 PM Cool poem. I particularly like the last line how you did your alliteration! John Hamilton December 19, 2015 at 9:26 PM Took a while to get it right, got out the dictionary! Ha ha!

Barbara Gorelick December 17, 2015 at 5:19 PM Whew! A lot in 4 lines...the last line is hmmmm...awesome.! BG