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Master Baker - For Barry

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Sweet Sarah got ready to bake A sticky rich dark ginger cake Her flour was appaulin’ - vile weevils were crawlin’ to use it would be a mistake! Those weevils could make her cake sour So Sarah gets rid of that flour She emits a cus Then hops on a bus… She’s baking in less than an hour For Barry with my love 08/20/20

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/22/2020 7:49:00 PM

I see those weevils caused quite an upheaval!! ~ Bread's Rising :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2020 3:00:00 AM

thanks so much for dropping by GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/21/2020 3:16:00 PM

Excellent limericks, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 3:19:00 PM

thanks Janice and my friend Barry logged on to read them i was delighted:-) hugs jan xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/21/2020 6:15:00 AM

Buying fresh flour seems to be the lesser of the two weevils. lol love it Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 9:11:00 AM

that is comment of the year Jerry lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/20/2020 10:44:00 PM

Hello Jan ... I wondered where you were going to go with heading but happily I was badly mistaken - enjoyed Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 12:08:00 AM

lol Lindsay you know me well lol ... i think a catchy title is as important as the body of the poem... :-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2020 3:49:00 PM

hmmm, the cake would have more protein if she' used that weevil flour. hahaha. Good one, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 12:07:00 AM

lol Andrea, it happened to me years ago too I now keep my flour in a sealed box:-) Am making a tea loaf today can't wait to try it the fruit has been soaking in tea for about 16 hrs now:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/20/2020 3:13:00 PM

Creepy little crawlers are disgusting. Good write, Jan...Who's Barry?

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2020 3:20:00 PM

Barry is an on line friend:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/20/2020 2:07:00 PM

She certainly used her loaf Jan, reminds me of sailors in Nelsons time, they used to be given biscuits that they ate in the dark because they were full of weevils, yuck. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2020 2:09:00 PM

eww it gets worse and worse lol, I recall getting weevils in a bag of flour I'd not used in a while ... now I keep my flour in a sealed box :-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/20/2020 1:35:00 PM

well done, jan! the picture and the thought of weevils in the flour just makes my skin crawl, though...

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2020 1:40:00 PM

I had a fun chat with my friend Barry and i created the poem around the story I was told:-)hugs Jan xx