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...inspired by 'The Subway' by Allen Tate Beneath the surface battle wagons screech, and hurtle through interminable night, the squealing din, like harpies to the fight becomes the threnody that screams to each brave soul, squeezed tight in unforgiving heat. The pages of a magazine lie scattered, US News And World Report, as if it mattered, captives wobble to the metronomic beat. Working men rub shoulders with Fifth Avenue elite, claustrophobics who are desperate to leave, once seen and never to be seen again, plunge into bright, end of the line for some. The street pulls pilgrims, anxiously they to brave the urgent undulations of the train.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/15/2009 9:51:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL! I love the last line and pretty much the entire first stanza!!! :D great job!
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Date: 5/13/2009 12:35:00 PM
I haven't had too many experiences riding the underground rails...being a country girl...but have found it facinating those few times I have...a whole different world! You have captured it perfectly, Keith!!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/13/2009 3:29:00 AM
Made me feel like I was riding the rails. Excellent write.
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Date: 5/12/2009 10:46:00 PM
You capture well the sights and sounds of the subway, Keith. Rode on many in New York and wobbled to their "metronomic beat." Excellent word choices employed throughout. Also like "the squealing din, like harpies to the fight." Good work!
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