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Masquerade

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ pink skies at dusk fade day ends in serene whispers night’s calm masquerade

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Joe Maverick

Date: 4/22/2024 11:16:00 PM

Wispering visions workless in their wonder..? Above toiling humanity, with all mistrust and Blunders, still we receive..Still we observe.? Particles within Creation, wa are negotiating Our part of Gods Eternal curve.! Great work Sara.!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/23/2024 4:45:00 AM

thanks for dropping by, Joe, and for your enthusiastic complimentary words...they mean a lot to me. Enjoy your day, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2024 2:46:00 PM

Beautiful!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/23/2024 4:46:00 AM

aww, thanks Kim. Have a pleasant day, hugs, Sara

Maximilian G. Wolf

Date: 4/22/2024 7:24:00 AM

Sara, Great read indeed. Thank you for sharing. /Max/

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/22/2024 8:38:00 AM

Hi Max--thanks for stopping by and for leaving your comments. Wishing you a pleasant day, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/22/2024 5:38:00 AM

Love that last line!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/22/2024 8:37:00 AM

thanks, dear Kim. Appreciate your visit today, hugs, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/22/2024 5:04:00 AM

Dear Sara, your poem gently drew me into a tranquil moment where day gracefully transitions into night. What a serene picture of nature's beauty, capturing the peaceful whispers of twilight. We need to appreciate the subtle magic surrounding us daily, even in the quiet moments when day surrenders to night's gentle embrace. I loved this serene masquerade of the sky you described so well with your words. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/22/2024 5:21:00 AM

thank you, Daniel, for such a mindful read and response to my poem. I'm grateful my poem eased you into a tranquil moment. How kind of you to say. Appreciate your visit. Have a blessed day, Sara

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/21/2024 11:42:00 PM

This is such a stunning Haiku dear Sara. I love the image your beautiful skilled words have majestically conjured up for the reader. So clever! The serenity here can be felt with the whispers and the masquerading. A heavenly read and I love it so I’m faving it. Thank you for sharing your much gifted talent - all of your gorgeous haiku’s should be formed into an enchanting book. Hugs to you for a blessed week xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/22/2024 5:20:00 AM

awww, thank you, Christina, for your your enthusiasm for my Haiku. Your remarks made my day. I'm glad you found it heavenly...that means a lot to me. I'm humbly grateful for the fave! Yes, I may put together my Haikus...great idea. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara