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Masks of An Emergency

The siren reels coming into the hospital bay, Emergency staff run, a “Code 4” on the way, Staff know that it is a serious situation, A person in distress is coming to this location. Out of the ambulance, a stretcher is rolled, The patient sitting upright, wrapped from the cold. Pale and clammy with lips and fingernails blue, The patient is restless not knowing what to do. A feeling of claustrophobia makes them seethe The oxygen mask is really helping them breathe, Confusion is common when your oxygen is low, The patient pulls at their mask, they don’t know The staff wear their mask of calm and control, The patient wants them to save their soul, Constant reassurance and underlying disease care, Help make the patient more alert and aware Underneath it all, staff are really scared, Saving another person, they have been dared, With improvement in breathing, off come the masks, The patient survives and staff return to their tasks. Written by Lee Ramage July 15, 2011 For “It’s Mask Time” contest by Nette Onclaud Won 8th Place

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Date: 7/24/2011 6:51:00 PM
whew! puts one right there! Congrats to you Lee.
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/24/2011 7:24:00 PM
Thanks for those comments... Lee
Date: 7/24/2011 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Lee on another great win with this superb poem which I read previously and luved for its brilliance and unique flare luv.. enjoy..
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/24/2011 7:23:00 PM
Thanks so much. Lee
Date: 7/24/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Mask" contest Lee. Love, Carol
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/24/2011 12:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, sometimes the words just flow and sometimes not so much. Appreciate your feedback. Lee
Date: 7/23/2011 3:40:00 PM
Lee, Great to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/24/2011 12:36:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your comments. Lee
Date: 7/16/2011 1:39:00 PM
Very stunning piece for the contest, Lee
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/16/2011 1:44:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments. Lee
Date: 7/16/2011 4:39:00 AM
Great Contender Lee. Way to go! Elaine
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/16/2011 7:37:00 AM
Just writing about what I know. Thanks for the kind comments. See you Monday am... I walk to your place.... I think! Lee
Date: 7/15/2011 12:25:00 PM
oh wow excellent Lee .. a riveting story in poetry emerges as a great contest entry for the mask theme..good luck luv.. it is superb..
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/15/2011 6:21:00 PM
It is quite an honour to receive such positive praise from a poet such as you. Thank you so much. Lee
Date: 7/14/2011 10:41:00 PM
Lee R, wow! what a turn,,, and view from the other side... enjoyed,.. Linda
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/14/2011 10:53:00 PM
Thanks, guess you can tell I been on both sides. I appreciate your kind comments. Lee

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