Masks of An Emergency

The siren reels coming into the hospital bay,
Emergency staff run, a “Code 4” on the way,
Staff know that it is a serious situation,
A person in distress is coming to this location.

Out of the ambulance, a stretcher is rolled,
The patient sitting upright, wrapped from the cold.
Pale and clammy with lips and fingernails blue,
The patient is restless not knowing what to do.

A feeling of claustrophobia makes them seethe
The oxygen mask is really helping them breathe,
Confusion is common when your oxygen is low,
The patient pulls at their mask, they don’t know

The staff wear their mask of calm and control,
The patient wants them to save their soul, 
Constant reassurance and underlying disease care,
Help make the patient more alert and aware

Underneath it all, staff are really scared,
Saving another person, they have been dared,
With improvement in breathing, off come the masks,
The patient survives and staff return to their tasks. 

Written by Lee Ramage
July 15, 2011
For “It’s Mask Time” contest by Nette Onclaud
Won 8th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dufresne Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 6:51 PM
whew! puts one right there! Congrats to you Lee.
Ramage Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Thanks for those comments... Lee
Sweetheart Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:10 PM
Congrats Lee on another great win with this superb poem which I read previously and luved for its brilliance and unique flare luv.. enjoy..
Ramage Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 7:23 PM
Thanks so much. Lee
Brown Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Mask" contest Lee. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Thanks so much, sometimes the words just flow and sometimes not so much. Appreciate your feedback. Lee
Freeman Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Lee, Great to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Ramage Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your comments. Lee
Mehta Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Very stunning piece for the contest, Lee
Ramage Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Thank you for your kind comments. Lee
George   Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Great Contender Lee. Way to go! Elaine
Ramage Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Just writing about what I know. Thanks for the kind comments. See you Monday am... I walk to your place.... I think! Lee
Sweetheart Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 12:25 PM
oh wow excellent Lee .. a riveting story in poetry emerges as a great contest entry for the mask theme..good luck luv.. it is superb..
Ramage Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 6:21 PM
It is quite an honour to receive such positive praise from a poet such as you. Thank you so much. Lee
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July 14, 2011 at 10:41 PM
Lee R, wow! what a turn,,, and view from the other side... enjoyed,.. Linda
Ramage Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 10:53 PM
Thanks, guess you can tell I been on both sides. I appreciate your kind comments. Lee
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