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Hidden - known but unknown: a reflection 
Of a soul; though not of a heart, 
Of a being rent apart 
from himself and from others - 
And futile the struggle 
And futile the cries 
For there is no escape though he may try -
both he and I are caught in his web of lies. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 4/26/2016 7:39:00 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup, Sharline :) - A great poem, deep and well written :) - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 4/26/2016 12:29:00 AM
Hi Sharline, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/25/2016 8:05:00 PM
Hope to see a new one from you soon Sharline.. SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:18:00 PM
Well I've been here before Sharline, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 2:37:00 PM
Sharline,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/24/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thank you! Much of the reason I joined this online community was to be able to gain honest feedback about my poetry from others so I would love constructive criticism if you would like :) I also love to be inspired by others works so I will definitely drop by your page and read a few of yours! My poetic skills (if you can call them that) are something I've always been unsure about...they stem from experience and a lot of reading; as I said before I would love to get some feedback/criticism if necessary! Thanks again