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Mary Jane (Still Life)

Memory, dress shoes Dancing across the wood floor Laughter and twirling For Raul's contest Still Life

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Date: 4/18/2010 2:18:00 PM
Good luck in the contest--- Enjoyed thanks and have a wonderful day, S.k.a.t.
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Date: 4/18/2010 5:00:00 AM
Hi Doris, what a lovely picture in this Senryu! Best wishes for the contest! I moved to Germany's east last year in September. My Mother Tongue is German, but I have lived and worked in many English speaking countries. The people here in my town speak German and learned Russian at shool, but the younger learn English now. I appreciate your comments.....Gert
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Date: 4/18/2010 2:51:00 AM
VERY good.I like how you saw it, doris. So which contest did YOU miss out on?
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