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Martinsburg West Virginia

Leaving the train left us rattled braising sounds abruptly heightened my senses measured completely beneath sullen moments within quiet calmness thee essence of West Virginia the hidden forestry catering to tiny mounds and trees industrial findings nestled crawdads flew out sparingly creating winged mesh emptiness covered in insects flesh

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Date: 6/23/2023 12:21:00 PM
Greetings Yolanda! I am so glad I found your poetry with its rich images," braising sounds," and metaphors. Your words create a strong scene and framework for your theme. So glad to have met you. Looking forward to reading more of your work. All the best. Blessings.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 1/6/2024 5:46:00 PM
Thanks a bunch for your warm comment

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