Martian Cigarettes

This Martian was as mean as it gets He ran out of Martian cigarettes. He landed his spaceship on earth, At a highway rest stop near Perth, and found plenty by trailing the pets. © Mar 13 2010 Placed 3rd in "Out of This World Limerick contest"
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Mehta Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Congrats for the win. Ienjoyed the humour in the poem
M Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 2:30 AM
hee, hee. Silly rabbit! Trix are for kids. (The old cereal commercial came to mind when I was chuckling.)
Hickman Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:16 PM
Congratulations so very very cute reminds me of Cheech and Chong movie,,,great write,,,Blessings...cecil
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations, Charles!
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March 23, 2010 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations Charles, on your win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire, with this funny limerick. I’m doubling over with laughter! I must say, it is a fun way to start the day. Laughingly, Dane Ann
White Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 7:44 AM
One funny Limerick Congrats Charles
Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on a much deserved win Charles. Agape, Moses
Dufresne Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Cool and funny Charles. Kudos to you!-Robert
Arteaga Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 11:21 PM
poor pets! congrats on your placements!
Johnson Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 4:54 PM
Great limerick. Lcongratulations on your win. Joyce
Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations Charles on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
Culverhouse Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 11:09 AM
congrats on your sucess in the contest!! funny and I enjoyed reading it!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Got a real kick thinking of the Martians looking for cigarettes by following the dogs around the rest areas. Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
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March 16, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Funny! What an interesting perspective. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Paul Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 5:54 AM
heh, heh...funny, latent, didactic!...especially luv the last line...profound! P
A  Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 11:04 PM
THIS IS CUTE, had fun reading...
Owens Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 9:54 PM
Very funny, enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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