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Mars

A red planet of cheese…wow!.. we could shoot the breeze together, while sinking to our knees, in the red sand dune brie, or interstellar camembert It’s all the same if you please, a moon of Sleaze and a Mars made of cheese: Tease!!??.. me never..let’s take the space elevator at four..pack your things…off we shoot! Gruyere and cheddar what a hoot!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/27/2015 2:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write peter ! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:31:00 AM
Great write, Peter, a cracker. To go with the cheese. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:15:00 PM
PETER Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 1:00:00 PM
MMMM a tasty write for sure:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/4/2015 6:35:00 AM
Fun and more fun! Good luck in the contest. Julia, :)
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Date: 6/29/2015 1:59:00 PM
I like this fun one for Mars. Love short poems like this one.
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Date: 6/29/2015 8:41:00 AM
Lol, this was fun to read
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