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Marriage of Oil and Water

Cups thrust high, A diving umbrella licks at many fingers, rose water licks - and seeks our elbows for a plunge and gathering below. Now echoes the trumpet prelude, a brilliant flash of praise, almost a ritual proclamation. It matters none friend whether you're pro or con. -When has it ever? Let us climb the high sun groping forest, and consume together with glee split faces, the sloppy viscous sex of misanthropy and philanthropy. Written by my husband Thielus. A. Green

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/25/2010 2:53:00 PM
He is a good poet just like you. Enjoyed
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Date: 3/21/2010 1:09:00 AM
One of these days I'm going to stumble upon one of your pieces Amy. Not that I don't enjoy the great work of your beloved hubby. Another great write of his. Best Wishes Always, Bill (Soup Mail)
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:39:00 PM
James, I think you got the wrong impression about this poem. Oh well, that's the great thing about poetry, like a painting, it will be interpreted a thousand different ways by a thousand different people.
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:27:00 PM
Marriage of Oil and Water, is like Fire and Ice > in fact this science is negative husband and wife > life or strife. Let opposites attract, it affects me none, but if it does for you, then your journeys began >> awesome piece Thielus >> James
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:53:00 PM
OK Amy. Are all your posts written by your hubby or am I missing something here (Just curious). It's a great write. Best Wishes Always, Bill (Soup Mail)
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:55:00 PM
Good write JB
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Date: 3/16/2010 9:30:00 AM
Love it - A well thought out write - Thanks for a great share - Got me thinking this one did !!!
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