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Marriage Lines

A heart that beats, I love you- seals a promise true A reflection inspired by watching my wife's heart on a echocardiogram screen yesterday. Also see my blog today.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/7/2009 3:34:00 PM

I missed this one earlier...but hope all is well with your wife!! We know here on the soup, that your own heart rings true! :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/2/2009 11:24:00 AM

Beautiful love note...lub dub. (Hope it was all normal.) BG

James Fraser

Date: 8/2/2009 5:03:00 AM

Exceptional emotion in this Fibonacci Brian, an absolute delight to read, thank you for sharing>>James

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/1/2009 8:28:00 PM

Beautiful Brian!!!!

John Freeman

Date: 8/1/2009 12:33:00 PM

A great deduction, from an observation, Brian, great thought, Moses

Sue Mason

Date: 8/1/2009 10:06:00 AM

Your output is absolutely amazing to me ... so many write in one day with all the different forms too !! I agree its the little life moments that make a difference. Oh, you left the "d" out of your echocardiogram ... smile ... hope your wife is okay and this was just a simple test!!

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 8/1/2009 8:02:00 AM

Awesome! and oh so sweet!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/1/2009 6:31:00 AM

yes! Brian! I see! and kinda like your blog about the Gentleman from my 'neck o' the woods' ...Frank Lloyd Wright...whose art is built all over up here!!! we see it all the time!! thanks for keepin' me "sharp-as-a-pencil" (ya sure! ok then!)

Krista Kurth

Date: 8/1/2009 5:15:00 AM

Your love and commitment to your wife comes through clearly in your poem. Hope all is well. Krista

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2009 4:27:00 AM

Interesting writing. I had a TIA a few months ago and had to have echocardiogram and the same type test on the arteries in my neck. They told me I would hear sounds and that was good. If I didn't hear sounds that was not good. It was interesting to hear my heart and the blood flow through my arteries. I was very glad that there was not any sufficient blockages. I hope that your wife's test were okay. Keep writing. Sara

Diane Christian

Date: 8/1/2009 1:57:00 AM

aww a beautiful write full of devotion, thanks for your kind comments on my poem I miss you God bless you from diane,