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Cotton Tree (pictured above) is in Maroochydore, Australia on the Sunshine Coast, Qld, where we first met and lived in the late 90s. This one is for Les.

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Maroochydawn

A year has passed but not July’s shiver,
  the bed is warm and in the air a chill
yet it’s not the cold that makes me quiver
  but the eros of our winter idyll.

All is bright, and I between God and you,
  the kookaburra is in the willow,
and honeyeaters in the honeydew
  flitter as I lay your breast and pillow.

She is up and rising at the cockcrow,
  her slumber over, her allure begun -
she comes to me parting her wet furrow
  and I am inside the gates of heaven!

All else forsaking at dawn’s early light
  I lay smitten from our midwinter night.
Kid, you mean and are everything to me
  and I do love the stars in Cotton Tree.
                                         
You are my morning and evening star,
  sweet temptress to the unexplored heart -
girl, all I need is to be where you are
  and never know what woe it is to part.

That matrix of life and morning glories -
  that corona from sunup to sundown
and brightest of all celestial bodies,
  my lips desiring its luminous crown.

All else forsaking at dawn’s early light
  I lay smitten from our midwinter night.
Kid, you mean and are everything to me
  and I do love the stars in Cotton Tree.
                           
So we are in our beguiling sublimed
  by a divine ordinance or blessing,
but visceral love, like a woman’s mind,
  keep mortal men eternal guessing.



              Written: July 1998
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Trestrail Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 6:42 AM
As you can all see I’ve changed it up and is no longer a sonnet. Instead it has morphed into a lyric.
Lawrence Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 4:54 PM
Keith, Capturing the essence of the moment within and viewed...love it ! Susan :)
Trestrail Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Hi Susan, nice to see ya. Glad you liked it.
Romios Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:39 PM
A sonnet for adults!i havent seen one like that here before,,,here! Yes there are good ones. Not ever touching this degree. It’s an awesome write. This is what a a POTD looks like to me! Pangie
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 5:48 PM
I dont want a POTD again. When they become vicious to any ethnic group, and poets respond like sheep! I pass. POTD is nowhere getting an Emmy award. And if a poem, condones murder… and other poet support that I consider all of them murderers too? Maybe you can explain that because I can’t.. and I have no intention of writing as a site that does so. I will be more than happy to support my friends, however, none of which are killers! I think you know what I mean)) Have a great day, Pangie.
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Thanks Pangie. I’m unlikely to get POTD anymore and I couldn’t care less. Take care.
Greenhough Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:44 PM
An uplifting sonnet, I also enjoyed the rhythmic cadence
Trestrail Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 3:32 AM
Thanks Hilda. Some dawns are brighter than others.
Velasco Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 6:52 PM
Hey Keith, your sonnet drenched in mid-winter warmth and rose-blushed desire is absolutely stunning.
Trestrail Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 7:32 PM
Hello Rowena. I’m glad you visited my humble page. May Eros visit upon you all your desires!
Rodgers Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Hello Keith, I like it because it’s sensual without posturing, lyrical without losing grit. You’ve captured a moment that’s tender, cosmic, and completely rooted in flesh. Keith you’ve made dawn feel a little more holy. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Trestrail Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Thanks for the visit, Daniel. We’re still together after all these years.
Cornish Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 11:21 AM
I'm quite sure you're a "guys-guy" and have been writing for quite a while (great writing)! Bravo mate!---when I was younger, I hid my pension for written thought - now I don't give a fart - quite sure you don't either - the gals have always loved it anyway...still do, even more so! Love the sonnet!
Trestrail Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 7:17 PM
I don’t sing or paint or sculpt or play an instrument so I write. Cheers Craig.
Beaufort Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:29 AM
Keith, you looked and described the feel of this place in no uncertain terms. Lucky to have these feelings and experiences. Smiles!
Trestrail Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:59 AM
Lady luck eh! Cheers.
Anaya Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 12:24 PM
It's a beautiful spot, KT
Trestrail Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:51 AM
Indeed.
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