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A year has passed but not July’s shiver, the bed is warm and in the air a chill yet it’s not the cold that makes me quiver but the eros of our winter idyll. She is up and rising at the cockcrow, her slumber over, her allure begun - she comes to me parting her wet furrow and I am inside the gates of heaven! That matrix of life and morning glories - that corona from sunup to sundown and brightest of all celestial bodies, my lips desiring its luminous crown. All else forsaking at dawn’s early light I lay smitten from our midwinter night. Written: July 1998 Note: Maroochydore is in Australia on the Sunshine Coast, Qld. I lived there in the late 90s.

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Date: 7/29/2025 4:54:00 PM
Keith, Capturing the essence of the moment within and viewed...love it ! Susan :)
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/29/2025 7:30:00 PM
Hi Susan, nice to see ya. Glad you liked it.
Date: 7/28/2025 5:39:00 PM
A sonnet for adults!i havent seen one like that here before,,,here! Yes there are good ones. Not ever touching this degree. It’s an awesome write. This is what a a POTD looks like to me! Pangie
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Date: 7/28/2025 5:57:00 PM
Thanks Pangie. I’m unlikely to get POTD anymore and I couldn’t care less. Take care.
Date: 7/26/2025 8:44:00 PM
An uplifting sonnet, I also enjoyed the rhythmic cadence
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/27/2025 3:32:00 AM
Thanks Hilda. Some dawns are brighter than others.
Date: 7/25/2025 6:52:00 PM
Hey Keith, your sonnet drenched in mid-winter warmth and rose-blushed desire is absolutely stunning.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/25/2025 7:32:00 PM
Hello Rowena. I’m glad you visited my humble page. May Eros visit upon you all your desires!
Date: 7/25/2025 7:03:00 AM
Hello Keith, I like it because it’s sensual without posturing, lyrical without losing grit. You’ve captured a moment that’s tender, cosmic, and completely rooted in flesh. Keith you’ve made dawn feel a little more holy. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/25/2025 2:30:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, Daniel. We’re still together after all these years.
Date: 7/22/2025 11:21:00 AM
I'm quite sure you're a "guys-guy" and have been writing for quite a while (great writing)! Bravo mate!---when I was younger, I hid my pension for written thought - now I don't give a fart - quite sure you don't either - the gals have always loved it anyway...still do, even more so! Love the sonnet!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/22/2025 7:17:00 PM
I don’t sing or paint or sculpt or play an instrument so I write. Cheers Craig.
Date: 7/17/2025 4:29:00 AM
Keith, you looked and described the feel of this place in no uncertain terms. Lucky to have these feelings and experiences. Smiles!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/17/2025 4:59:00 AM
Lady luck eh! Cheers.
Date: 7/13/2025 12:24:00 PM
It's a beautiful spot, KT
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/17/2025 4:51:00 AM
Indeed.

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