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Mariner

midnight sky canvas city lights erase all stars disoriented

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/27/2023 1:33:00 PM
Lo e the twist in the end..Great juxta...I can feel that disorientation..seeing those bright city lights almost blinding me from seeing the serene night stars,making me dizzy ..Love this one
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/27/2023 6:53:00 PM
Thx CC. Artificial light isn't always the way to see well. :o)
Date: 9/23/2023 3:05:00 AM
You are the master of the haiku.. you do it perfectly.. great imagery in this one and most importantly the format is spot on..
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/23/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, S1. Must admit my brain works in Haiku format!! :-)

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