Marie Circa 1926

Imperceptibly disappointed he smiled, tipped his hat and walked on 
Marie dreaded having to end the salesman’s eager speech with a negative reply 
Buying life insurance for her children was anticipating tragedy
Money can’t be used to bargain with God and have my children returned to me 
Marie’s eight month old daughter died a short time later 
She worked so hard to save her baby, the only daughter she would ever know 
Once again the salesman returned but this time to taunt and mock 
You could have made some money but you didn’t buy insurance did you?
Her teeth chattering in anger and disbelief at such unwarranted spite Marie shrieked you get out of here
In the newspaper she read the salesman had hanged himself 
Marie felt responsible and very sorry 
His sacrifice didn’t bring Florence back
They both lost  


By Suzanne Boyko
June 1, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/28/2021 12:22:00 PM
Wow. Karma, I think
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Suzanne Boyko
Date: 9/28/2021 4:48:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. What I found amazing about the situation was Marie's compassion. He did wrong but Marie didn't wish him harm. Suzanne
Date: 9/28/2021 11:43:00 AM
He who gloats floats?
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Date: 9/28/2021 4:50:00 PM
I so appreciate having feedback. It was a powerful story when I heard it so many years ago. Definitely worth writing about. Thank you. Suzanne
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