Marie

My Marie, wasted so much time watching
Sat behind your image, I always wondered
Type me another picture, so I can look inside your head
Reach the final thread

When all the words are said and done
And times we have no longer fun
Please remember how it all begun
Cause no one won, no one won

My Marie, did you really think I’d change
Become your love, rearrange my life to suit your soul
Could we really be such fools
Expect to change the rules forever

When all the words are said and done
And times we have no longer fun
Please remember how it all begun
Cause no one won, no one won

My Marie, another picture in another place
Dirty talk, dirty sleaze
Lousy love that didn’t please
High class b****h , f*****g tease

When all the words are said and done
And times we have no longer fun
Please remember how it all begun
Cause no one won, no one won

My Marie, dressed to thrill, stocking tops where guys would kill
Pink champagne upon your breasts
Trickling down your shaven nest
Sighs to screams, frenzied pace
Champagne and love, the sultry taste

When all the words are said and done
And times we have no longer fun
Please remember how it all begun
Cause no one won, no one won

My Marie, we fight goodbye
Mocking insults, tears to cry
Words like daggers deep inside
Daggers deep inside
Goodbye, Marie, our time has come
The pictures running dry
Sat behind your image, I always wondered why

One day I was feeling all alone
Felt so really down
Remembered a pair of lacy pants
And put them to my brow
Champagne and scent came flooding back, and time began to clear
For a fleeting moment I had you
And then you weren't there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Nicholsen Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 4:02 PM
Marie Marie indeed painful letting go of the love of your life truly sad you shared laughs but no fun an empty write with so much passion for her you sound very bitter but not done many blessings to you and your Marie.
Bell Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 2:19 AM
I think some couples are better apart, and those two are that couple.
Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Reads like a song...a sad, country song Paul. LOL Love is a pain in the b... neck! Or is it? :)
Bell Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Love is a pain, when are you putting music to it.
Empress Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 2:54 PM
For a moment i had you and then not, ah what a poignant and soul hitting write this is. I felt so much reading this dear paul. So many lines resonated and hit so strong for me. Especially “ My Marie, we fight goodbye Mocking insults, tears to cry Words like daggers deep inside Daggers deep inside Goodbye, Marie, our time has come“ this is so sad and touching! A fave it is for me felt this
Bell Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 9:45 AM
Love sure can be painful at times. Times on his side.
Puddifoot Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 2:18 PM
i like the way you've written this, the rhyme and use of repetition giving the poem a sing-song quality, almost like an incantation..
Bell Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:05 AM
If only I could sing. You doing ok, been awhile.
One Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:51 PM
A lot of emotions in this one Paul.. some very raw ones...
Bell Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Yes, he's a guy with a lot of regrets.
Rodgers Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Hello Paul, This is a great piece of exploration of love, loss, and disillusionment. The raw emotion evokes a sense of longing, regret, and the complexities of human relationships. It's the fleeting nature of love and the pain that comes with its absence. I love how your words capture the essence of heartbreak and the bittersweet memories that linger long after love has faded. - Blessings, Daniel
Bell Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:10 AM
Thanks, Daniel. Man's implosive nature, bringing the inevitable outcome in this write. We never learn.
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