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Marie

My Marie, wasted so much time watching Sat behind your image, I always wondered Type me another picture, so I can look inside your head Reach the final thread When all the words are said and done And times we have no longer fun Please remember how it all begun Cause no one won, no one won My Marie, did you really think I’d change Become your love, rearrange my life to suit your soul Could we really be such fools Expect to change the rules forever When all the words are said and done And times we have no longer fun Please remember how it all begun Cause no one won, no one won My Marie, another picture in another place Dirty talk, dirty sleaze Lousy love that didn’t please High class b****h , f*****g tease When all the words are said and done And times we have no longer fun Please remember how it all begun Cause no one won, no one won My Marie, dressed to thrill, stocking tops where guys would kill Pink champagne upon your breasts Trickling down your shaven nest Sighs to screams, frenzied pace Champagne and love, the sultry taste When all the words are said and done And times we have no longer fun Please remember how it all begun Cause no one won, no one won My Marie, we fight goodbye Mocking insults, tears to cry Words like daggers deep inside Daggers deep inside Goodbye, Marie, our time has come The pictures running dry Sat behind your image, I always wondered why One day I was feeling all alone Felt so really down Remembered a pair of lacy pants And put them to my brow Champagne and scent came flooding back, and time began to clear For a fleeting moment I had you And then you weren't there.

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Date: 3/30/2024 4:02:00 PM
Marie Marie indeed painful letting go of the love of your life truly sad you shared laughs but no fun an empty write with so much passion for her you sound very bitter but not done many blessings to you and your Marie.
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/31/2024 2:19:00 AM
I think some couples are better apart, and those two are that couple.
Date: 3/25/2024 1:25:00 PM
Reads like a song...a sad, country song Paul. LOL Love is a pain in the b... neck! Or is it? :)
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/26/2024 8:32:00 AM
Love is a pain, when are you putting music to it.
Date: 3/23/2024 3:20:00 PM
Lots of what I call 'raw' emotions in this poem. I especially liked words like daggers deep inside...I felt the heartache and pain as I read your poem. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/24/2024 9:44:00 AM
A bit of pain definitely, he'll learn.
Date: 3/23/2024 2:54:00 PM
For a moment i had you and then not, ah what a poignant and soul hitting write this is. I felt so much reading this dear paul. So many lines resonated and hit so strong for me. Especially “ My Marie, we fight goodbye Mocking insults, tears to cry Words like daggers deep inside Daggers deep inside Goodbye, Marie, our time has come“ this is so sad and touching! A fave it is for me felt this
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/24/2024 9:45:00 AM
Love sure can be painful at times. Times on his side.
Date: 3/22/2024 2:18:00 PM
i like the way you've written this, the rhyme and use of repetition giving the poem a sing-song quality, almost like an incantation..
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/23/2024 7:05:00 AM
If only I could sing. You doing ok, been awhile.
Date: 3/22/2024 12:51:00 PM
A lot of emotions in this one Paul.. some very raw ones...
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/23/2024 7:07:00 AM
Yes, he's a guy with a lot of regrets.
Date: 3/22/2024 10:54:00 AM
Hello Paul, This is a great piece of exploration of love, loss, and disillusionment. The raw emotion evokes a sense of longing, regret, and the complexities of human relationships. It's the fleeting nature of love and the pain that comes with its absence. I love how your words capture the essence of heartbreak and the bittersweet memories that linger long after love has faded. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/23/2024 7:10:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel. Man's implosive nature, bringing the inevitable outcome in this write. We never learn.

Book: Shattered Sighs