Mariah

Mariah
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

Mariah, enigmatic mysterious and unknowable
Brushed her dazzling obsidian hair in the brilliant sunlight.
Indistinctive, but nonetheless inscrutable primal urges
Foreshadowed what one might assume to be inevitable.

Omniscient and powerful was the one that upon her gazed.
He construed all manner of romantic imaginations. 
She, on the other hand, intuitively continued brushing.
And having guessed his unscrupulous intentions was aloof.

Lust, since the days of Odysseus and before have plagued mankind.
The carnal can construe many illusions about such things.
Mariah, being righteous, shunned love’s false impressions and remained.
Resplendent, she sat alone in the park, brushing her soft locks.

Kindhearted, was she, a natural born innocent beauty, too.
Distant and quiet, she continued to stroke her long black hair.
Dawn had clearly passed and noonday’s brightness shimmered upon her flesh.
There she reposed in the grass pondering thoughts about her God.

He, on the other hand, had devised an unfathomable plan.
And with cunning conceit drew closer to the unblemished lass.
Dazzling her with his splendid words and refined charms, he gained her trust.
A primitive desire for forbidden passion ruled him.

Gullible and alone, she received his promises of friendship.
Unbeknown to her, his mind, was brewing a different scheme.
The naive girl, laughed inside quietly for found companionship.
She ambled with him, unaware of his ulterior plot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 11, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Awesome freestyle well worth the feature.... Great job D.A.S.J......:JP]
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November 10, 2009 at 6:58 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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November 10, 2009 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dane Ann. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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November 9, 2009 at 1:56 PM
Good use of imagery to convey your story in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. You have Soup mail regarding the blog I just posted. Have a good day! Karen
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November 9, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I enjoyed reading it. Love Pam
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November 9, 2009 at 10:50 AM
congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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November 9, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week Dane >> James
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November 8, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Dane.Rgds Brian
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May 14, 2009 at 3:40 PM
I'm waiting for part B...or maybe not. Great win. ! BG
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May 14, 2009 at 3:01 PM
Nice work and great win Miss Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen. -AA
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May 14, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Dear Dane,Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Win in Deborah's Contest Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comments Always...HG
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May 14, 2009 at 6:28 AM
Excellent writing. Congratulations on placing in Deborah's contest. Smiles from Lolita
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May 13, 2009 at 11:53 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Dane Rgds Brian
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May 13, 2009 at 6:54 PM
nice work Dane and congrats on your placement in the contest...Raul
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May 13, 2009 at 4:46 PM
This was so amazing, Sandra....excellent work!! A great big congratulations on this winning poem!! ~ Love, Carrie
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May 13, 2009 at 4:24 PM
YAY YIPPEEEE Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest! So excellent and well deserved! Love, Shar xo
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April 16, 2009 at 5:23 AM
I feel like there should be a sequel to this, however I am afraid of what it might hold. Held captive throughout. Excellent writing. Love, Shar
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April 15, 2009 at 3:49 PM
ow my ,i read and reread,wonderfully written,yeah unfortunately one can find wolves amongst sheep,who take advantage of the naive and innocent-bravo my dear friend-charma
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April 15, 2009 at 3:36 PM
This is frightening, Dane Ann. The evil have always preyed upon the innocent, but your story has an ominous tone. I have no doubt what his "ulterior plot" is, but somehow I wish she could be saved, preserving her "innocent beauty." Absolutely captivating poetry! Love, Carolyn
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