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Marguerite's New Diet -Edited

Marguerite - how she'd cheat! She would eat something sweet for a treat. All for that, got MORE fat. Oops! She sat on her cat. It went splat! Jan. 10, 2022 for Joseph May's What's New Poetry Contest (adjusted to NEW theme)

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Kim Merryman

Date: 1/19/2022 7:06:00 AM

I enjoyed your funny write, Andrea! Poor kitty! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/17/2022 9:33:00 PM

'Marguerite's New Diet -edited' - Great title. Whole poem is beautifully written in this new style. Congratulations!

Joseph May

Date: 1/17/2022 8:01:00 PM

I enjoyed this fun write Andrea, Congrats on your win

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2022 2:50:00 AM

Between my high school years, many moons ago, And now, Have a choc, or chock muffin every day, I weigh, 5 kilos, more in this day, sometimes less, what can I say, Solemn truth, yes, not a nay. However after both my pregnancies had to diet long and hard and with a determined will. Your poem is humorous and enjoyable my friend, hope you are keeping well, and that you have a happy, healthy and awesomely wonderful 2022. love and hugs, Jennifer

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/12/2022 6:11:00 AM

Oh dear one flat cat, love it. Andrea, the poetry that is, feeling sorry for felix.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/11/2022 7:56:00 PM

Ugh! Cats-up all over! Oh Andrea, this is sooo funny, but that poor kitty! Merry squish-mess Marguerite!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/11/2022 5:41:00 PM

Hilarious, and well-written, too. Andrea, I thoroughly enjoyed your monorhyme stanzas. Just perfect for the contest.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2022 4:28:00 PM

Andrea, you've written a hilarious poem. It's fantastic. What a pathetic kitty!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2022 4:15:00 PM

Good fix Andrea. Many contests I thought about entering our closing. I just got my sonnet into the Valentine contest in time. I need to check if you entered it too. You, the expert with the sonnet form, will most likely shine with blinding light! Hugs Connie xxoo