Marchsillypus

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O Marchsillypus!
Sour apples, roaring dandelions
lambykins and daffodils
furglowering seeds
blown through sweetling fingers
and tweedy cantankerous fiends
with the fierceness of lions
toss the bouncing balls
of lollypopkins into streets
not made of gold
to save his much too lawngreen soul
except for honeysweet grandma types
who stomp on the old man’s toes
he cries with defeat
as his sprinkler tears torture more seeds to sprout
and poppop is forced to pat
candy-necklaced twins
softly on their wretched heads
his sentinel-wife sanctimonious with arrowslant eyes
will reprise a kick in his bumbum
if he doesn’t likewise pat their furpet
who tinkles and wrecks havoc
O sillysourpusskin
your dreams are afright
not for sun days but treacherous nights

3/10/2021

JUST A SILLY POEM!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/11/2021 5:41:00 AM
“His sentinel-wife sanctimonious with arrow slant eyes” That line conjures a humorous image in my mind. Great stuff!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2021 6:22:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed! Thank you!
Date: 3/10/2021 4:55:00 PM
Sanctimonious bumbum and arrowslant furpets are two of my favorite expressions --- now, anyway. lol. Just loved how much fun you've had with this one, Kim! Write on! ~ Ambivalent Slurpie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2021 6:36:00 PM
Thanks, Ambivalent ;) Like, Caren, I thought you might like this one. Glad you did!
Date: 3/10/2021 11:18:00 AM
"and poppop is forced to pat candy-necklaced twins softly on their wretched heads" Oh, wow! Do I ever love this one!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2021 6:31:00 PM
I thought you might! Thanks so much!
Date: 3/10/2021 9:34:00 AM
Silly? But funny. Enjoyed your visuals especially grandma stomping on grandpa's toes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2021 6:30:00 PM
LOL...glad you enjoyed! ;)
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