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O Marchsillypus! Sour apples, roaring dandelions lambykins and daffodils furglowering seeds blown through sweetling fingers and tweedy cantankerous fiends with the fierceness of lions toss the bouncing balls of lollypopkins into streets not made of gold to save his much too lawngreen soul except for honeysweet grandma types who stomp on the old man’s toes he cries with defeat as his sprinkler tears torture more seeds to sprout and poppop is forced to pat candy-necklaced twins softly on their wretched heads his sentinel-wife sanctimonious with arrowslant eyes will reprise a kick in his bumbum if he doesn’t likewise pat their furpet who tinkles and wrecks havoc O sillysourpusskin your dreams are afright not for sun days but treacherous nights 3/10/2021 JUST A SILLY POEM!

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Date: 3/11/2021 3:04:00 PM
Oh Kim, this is more than just a silly poem, for sure. This well-crafted light verse is genius. Your phrases are excellent wordsmithing. I love this to the point that it is now a fav= for me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2021 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much! I had fun writing ita,
Date: 3/11/2021 5:41:00 AM
“His sentinel-wife sanctimonious with arrow slant eyes” That line conjures a humorous image in my mind. Great stuff!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2021 6:22:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed! Thank you!
Date: 3/10/2021 4:55:00 PM
Sanctimonious bumbum and arrowslant furpets are two of my favorite expressions --- now, anyway. lol. Just loved how much fun you've had with this one, Kim! Write on! ~ Ambivalent Slurpie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2021 6:36:00 PM
Thanks, Ambivalent ;) Like, Caren, I thought you might like this one. Glad you did!
Date: 3/10/2021 11:18:00 AM
"and poppop is forced to pat candy-necklaced twins softly on their wretched heads" Oh, wow! Do I ever love this one!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2021 6:31:00 PM
I thought you might! Thanks so much!
Date: 3/10/2021 9:34:00 AM
Silly? But funny. Enjoyed your visuals especially grandma stomping on grandpa's toes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2021 6:30:00 PM
LOL...glad you enjoyed! ;)

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