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Oliver Mckeithan's Memorial Day Contest...15 May 25

~ dedicated to my general father of the Philippine Air Force, who fought bravely in the war and later passed on at age 53... he honored his love for family and country....I miss you, Dad.!

 

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Marching For Freedom



Medals on frames stood upright and straight,
Like guns marching on bloody road to Death March
At eighteen, he bore the pellets of war’s cause
Fingers wounded by splinters from a grenade

Spawned by raw courage for freedom’s glory
He counted black hours guarding his troops;
Piloting aircraft and landing on muddy swamp 
Worse was the order to kick his dead friend, Paul.

Black nights fed thinner ribs with brisk attacks
Riddling air with roulette of mortar sounds,
Yet country’s honor soared higher than gray winds
A testament for a man of lofty ideals.

Tales of grit, battle scars wrapped in dignity
A body resting on heroes’ graveyard, our flag rising;
Until the end, code of gallantry filled life’s moments
Of one general, dear Dad, your spirit walks with me.

2nd place
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Date: 5/20/2025 12:10:00 PM
It's all I can do to hold the tears back your poem induced. War 'stuff' always threatens my tears, and its effects on people from loss of a loved one, is especially able to bring tender tears. I am touched, empathetic and spiritually saddened by your poem. I am also glad for your placement - what a mixed bag of feelings ... CayCay
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Date: 5/19/2025 7:24:00 PM
Amazing tribute and story, Nette. Congratulations on your win with gratitude for reading this story. Blessings!
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Date: 5/19/2025 7:00:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Nette. What a wonderful tribute to your brave father. Thanks for sharing this.
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Date: 5/17/2025 8:39:00 AM
Your dad is one of our countty's bravest heroes my dear poet friend & sis! Hand salute to him to express my gratitude, honor and respect. Hand salute to you as well,her gorgeous and very talented daughter for this lovely and superb dedication to Him. I'm sure his spirit walks proudly with you. Thanks for sharing! God bless. Hugs
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Date: 5/17/2025 12:42:00 AM
Beautiful dedication!
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Date: 5/16/2025 7:09:00 PM
It's different, reading a patriotic poem from another country than mine. I loved your words, his "spirit walks with me"
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Date: 5/16/2025 1:39:00 AM
jut wonderful poetry, images are great and quiet, enjoyed the punchline and messages, thanks a lot poet
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Date: 5/15/2025 11:43:00 AM
What a wonderful write/tribute you have here. I also still miss my dad. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away.......
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Date: 5/14/2025 9:10:00 PM
A great tribute to war heroes in general and your Dad in particular. They have sacrificed their dear lives to keep our country's flag flying high and keep our borders safe from enemy attacks. A lovely poem, dear Nette. All the Best.
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