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Oliver Mckeithan's Memorial Day Contest...15 May 25

~ dedicated to my general father of the Philippine Air Force, who fought bravely in the war and later passed on at age 53... he honored his love for family and country....I miss you, Dad.!

 

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Marching For Freedom



Medals on frames stood upright and straight,
Like guns marching on bloody road to Death March
At eighteen, he bore the pellets of war’s cause
Fingers wounded by splinters from a grenade

Spawned by raw courage for freedom’s glory
He counted black hours guarding his troops;
Piloting aircraft and landing on muddy swamp 
Worse was the order to kick his dead friend, Paul.

Black nights fed thinner ribs with brisk attacks
Riddling air with roulette of mortar sounds,
Yet country’s honor soared higher than gray winds
A testament for a man of lofty ideals.

Tales of grit, battle scars wrapped in dignity
A body resting on heroes’ graveyard, our flag rising;
Until the end, code of gallantry filled life’s moments
Of one general, dear Dad, your spirit walks with me.

2nd place
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Godwin Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 12:10 PM
It's all I can do to hold the tears back your poem induced. War 'stuff' always threatens my tears, and its effects on people from loss of a loved one, is especially able to bring tender tears. I am touched, empathetic and spiritually saddened by your poem. I am also glad for your placement - what a mixed bag of feelings ... CayCay
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Amazing tribute and story, Nette. Congratulations on your win with gratitude for reading this story. Blessings!
Mckeithan Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 7:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Nette. What a wonderful tribute to your brave father. Thanks for sharing this.
Gasun Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 8:39 AM
Your dad is one of our countty's bravest heroes my dear poet friend & sis! Hand salute to him to express my gratitude, honor and respect. Hand salute to you as well,her gorgeous and very talented daughter for this lovely and superb dedication to Him. I'm sure his spirit walks proudly with you. Thanks for sharing! God bless. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 12:42 AM
Beautiful dedication!
Hind Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 7:09 PM
It's different, reading a patriotic poem from another country than mine. I loved your words, his "spirit walks with me"
Rolland Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 1:39 AM
jut wonderful poetry, images are great and quiet, enjoyed the punchline and messages, thanks a lot poet
Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 11:43 AM
What a wonderful write/tribute you have here. I also still miss my dad. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away.......
George Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 9:10 PM
A great tribute to war heroes in general and your Dad in particular. They have sacrificed their dear lives to keep our country's flag flying high and keep our borders safe from enemy attacks. A lovely poem, dear Nette. All the Best.
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