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March of the Footle

March Of The Footle Contest Sponsor: Timothy Hicks Our Favorite Flower white rose love grows ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love Me Every Hour time stop clothes drop ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Let's Devour hold me break free ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tallest Tower up high let's fly ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Affection's Power hold me love thee ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Never Glower please stay don't stray Date Written: March 3, 2016

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Brian Strand

Date: 3/14/2016 6:45:00 AM

Hi Laura, I like your inventive variation (as above ) to my footle form with the introduction of rhymed title sequence and would like your permission to add it to my variation examples on my footle blogspot page(with appropriate credit to your goodself)? rgds Brian

Lu Loo
Date: 3/14/2016 5:32:00 PM

I just soup mailed you a minute ago about it...thank you! -luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:23:00 PM

gosh, how did I ever miss these. I really like them, and i hope they placed high!

Lu Loo
Date: 3/14/2016 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2016 5:31:00 PM

lovely string of footles LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 9:49:00 PM

Thank you Jan :)-luloo *smiles*

Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2016 12:51:00 PM

You penned a most lovely string of footles, Laura! Well done and congratulations on your fine win! ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 2:52:00 PM

Thank you Paul :)-luloo *smiles*

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2016 8:39:00 AM

Congrats on your winner..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 2:51:00 PM

No thank you Sara! -luloo *smiles*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/11/2016 2:21:00 AM

Brilliant take Laura.. congrats on great win with these lovely footles..

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo *smiles*

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/10/2016 11:27:00 PM

Very good footle....

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Probir :)-luloo *smiles*

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/10/2016 9:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Laura :)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 2:49:00 PM

Thank you Laura :)-luloo *smiles*

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/10/2016 9:11:00 PM

Very nicely written, luloo-- I like the expansion of the flow into the titles as well, a very nice touch! Congrats on your placement :)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2016 2:49:00 PM

Thank you Sam :)-luloo *smiles*

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 8:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Laura! I thought what you did with your footles was very cool ... adding the extra rhymes even in the titles ... gives it a nice little touch.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2016 8:12:00 PM

Thank you Timothy, I am honored to have been placed in your contest. I really enjoyed this form, it's the first time ever writing a footle. Thank you again! -luloo *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2016 12:23:00 PM

- Oh, great Laura :) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/3/2016 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :)-luloo *smiles*

John Lawless

Date: 3/3/2016 11:25:00 AM

Well done Laura.....

Lu Loo
Date: 3/3/2016 11:41:00 AM

Thank you John very much :)-luloo