March

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With the turquoise winds Memories of mist and snow Melt into warm mud

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John Watt

Date: 4/23/2020 7:47:00 PM

Warm mud pretty much describes March! At least it's warm (sometimes). Great haiku.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2018 1:22:00 PM

From your pen to the weather forecaster's heart, Michelle! Let it be! :) Gershon

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thank you, hope you're having some 'warm mud'! - Michelle

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/26/2018 8:07:00 PM

Very vivid...and wet...Enjoyed your Haiku...All the best MF

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2018 10:50:00 AM

Thank you, appreciate your feedback!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/26/2018 3:34:00 PM

Very nice Haiku and so true :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/26/2018 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Heidi, I liked your haiku 'Frozen' very much too!