Marble In Columns On Green

On a slope graced with green
White marble stands in proud salute

For beneath these engraved pillars of memory
Lie the resting places of heroes

A solitary green fir looks down
As if sheltering the lost and the taken

So many names, from all walks of life
A father, brother a girlfriend or wife

On a sunny day, they glow radiant like their lives
On a dull day, they stand out against the greys

For the living, life goes on 
Tomorrow is another day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 10:27 AM
My favorite one of yours and it Won! luV, Andrea, congratulations.
Haick Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Hey James! Highlander!! My warm congratulations on your Ist Place win in the contest!! THis is a gem!! And thanks for reading mine and leaving your always kind and encouraging comments, my friend!! Peace, Audrey
Anderson Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Hey James, Congratulations on your win in the contest with this great piece. ....I've asked Audrey to leave this comment on my behalf. ....Jimmy
K. Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 12:53 AM
No wonder why this won :) Congrats with your first place win, James--indeed life goes on but you sure wrote why remembrance can be such a beautiful thing...keep writing and thanks for your comments :)
Crisci Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your first place in Brian's contest.Ilove the flow of words, the imagery, even though it's full of sadness! A great tribute to those we have lost...Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry. God bless you in everything you do. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 6:47 AM
enjoyed, congrats on the big win!! number one!!
Johnson Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Congratulations on your first palce win with this masterpiece. Love, joyce
James Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Well Done James. A well deserved win i must say! As always...an inspiration. Gareth
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Your poetic talent shines as usual, James. I salute you, for your well deserved 1st place win. The strength of emotions written in these words is tremendous. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Owens Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your win..Enjoyed reading..Still don't understand why you're leaving...Hope you change your mind. Marty
Villarosa Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 2:30 AM
Very awakening and inspirational for the living and able to feel or perceive the presence of the departed one. Congratulations on winning to this contest, James. A deserving win. (^_^) Noel
Fisher Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 12:11 AM
James - many congrats on your well deserved first place in Brians contest. Thanks for your comments. Much love Janette
Gorelick Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Im so happy for you..this is a wonderful piece..many congrats on a 1st place win..Yeah! BG
Arteaga Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Of coarse this got first, so much to put, great poem! congrats!
La France Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Congatulations on first place with this wonderful poem.. Constance
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 10:59 PM
WOW, you DID truly deserve this win. this goes to FAVS!!
Foster Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 9:13 PM
Well done James, this is a beautiful work, congratulations...Margaret
 Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 6:06 PM
What an uplifting poem. Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE finish in Brian's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your big honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Richards Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 1:35 PM
What a wonderful poem, James! Congratulations on this 1st place win....well deserved!! Hooray for you! ~ Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 11:14 AM
A BIG CONGRATS James on your first place win in Brian's contest... a wonderful well deserved write and win.. enjoy..luv.. :Sweetheart"
Devonshire Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 8:35 AM
This is a great poem, James! Congratulations on winning first place in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
Strand Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 8:17 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest James.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'AN EASTER PICTURE' is now open.If you would care to soupmail me a forwarding address I'll mail your prize
Strand Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 12:10 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest James.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Outstanding poem for the contest, James..this is a theme that reminds us we should take each tomorrow as a gift, and use wisely. Good luck in the contest!! ps ..(I thank you so much for reading several of my poems, and the kindness in your comments. It means a lot to me! :) Love, Carrie
Haick Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 1:33 PM
As those marble slabs stand forever so will the heroic deeds they accomplished, James! I don't have to wish you good luck with this Winner!! I love it. Peace, Audrey
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace