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Marble Eyes

Somehow among the hidden leaves of time when quietude swerves on a road leading me to reach for waning hours, there is a lush of evening's breath panting inside those marble eyes that if I gaze long enough into darkness your iced look will blink, to open windows that are locked by hinges creating knots enmeshed. The distant screams paint your irises jutting out from a frame of hard lids buried deeply on frigid weeds-- and the night loses its elegance while your crystal tears invade the shining glow behind the lamp within your eyes---I learn to understand how confidential this time is when you fade away, knowing not I am there. Gabby Sabre Metaphor: Crystal for nette onclaud 06 March 14

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Date: 3/21/2014 6:31:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your great write and well-deserved win my dear friend . TYSM for sharing as well. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:31:00 PM
Gabby :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." LUV~LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2014 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, gabby
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Date: 3/18/2014 9:52:00 PM
A lovely winning poem gabby, have a nice day...SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2014 2:00:00 PM
the entire poem is a great metaphor, gabby... warm congrats on your win in my contest.. hugggs
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Date: 3/18/2014 1:51:00 PM
Congrats Gabby on your win; this gem was worth every bit of it.! // paul
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Date: 3/18/2014 1:09:00 PM
- Hi Gabby - congratulations on your great win in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful poem ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/18/2014 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Gabby! Verlena
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