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Andrea Dietrick's Contest Pleiades 18 Oct 24

Maples

Montage of Autumn flows
Marked by minty trees ...lush!
Mauve-gold leaves whirl a  prance
Melding shade for couples -
Moonlight foliage thralls
Mood's magic brings rapture
Maple moments of Fall !
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Elliott Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 6:07 PM
What a beauteous autumnal poem, Nette. A big Congratulations on your win. Have a splendid Saturday evening. Blessings :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on you win. A wonderful "Maples" write. I love their a pretty leaves. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Love your imagery, Nette. Thanks for creating this lovely poem. Congrats and a soupmail.
Beaufort Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 8:23 AM
Nette, I read this and feel as though I should have some maple syrup on a pancake as a celebration of what you've written. Smiles.
Williams Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 12:17 AM
Oh such an array of colour, feel and texture, aroma and romantic magic all assail the readers senses. All the best for the contest. Hugs Maria
One Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Awesome entry for the contest and use of the letter Maple and M... Lovely imagery right from the first line with a great selection of words.. All the best..
Rose  Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 3:13 AM
wow I love the way you use every sense in this poem, who on earth would ever come up with such a line " Maple moments of fall" that is brilliant writing Nette, I love it ! and you :)
George Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 9:50 PM
Magical and magnificent are your maples of mauve- golden leaves, melding multi shades. All the best dear Nette.
Hind Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 7:42 PM
What a lovely poem- "Mood's magic brings spell on Maple moments of Fall !" yessss
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 2:49 PM
Love the imagery within alliteration!
Empress Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 12:11 PM
Wow this is magical, and so mesmerizing! Youv got so many elements i like woven in here which makes this easily a personal fave for me! I especially love “ Mauve-gold leaves whirls a dance“ how stunning! “ Moonlight medley enthralls“ just loveee that!!! I think andrea will love this one! Best wishes. Sending you light always
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