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Maples

Montage of Autumn flows
Marked by minty trees ...lush!
Mauve-gold leaves whirl a dance
Melding shade for lovers -
Moonlight medley enthralls
Mood's magic brings spell on
Maple moments of Fall !

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Regina Elliott Date: 11/16/2024 6:07:00 PM What a beauteous autumnal poem, Nette. A big Congratulations on your win. Have a splendid Saturday evening. Blessings :) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 11/3/2024 10:38:00 AM Congratulations on you win. A wonderful "Maples" write. I love their a pretty leaves. Have a blessed day writing away............. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/2/2024 4:58:00 PM Love your imagery, Nette. Thanks for creating this lovely poem. Congrats and a soupmail. Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 10/20/2024 8:23:00 AM Nette, I read this and feel as though I should have some maple syrup on a pancake as a celebration of what you've written. Smiles. Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 10/20/2024 12:17:00 AM Oh such an array of colour, feel and texture, aroma and romantic magic all assail the readers senses. All the best for the contest. Hugs Maria Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 10/19/2024 6:33:00 AM Awesome entry for the contest and use of the letter Maple and M... Lovely imagery right from the first line with a great selection of words.. All the best.. Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/19/2024 3:13:00 AM wow I love the way you use every sense in this poem, who on earth would ever come up with such a line " Maple moments of fall" that is brilliant writing Nette, I love it ! and you :) Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 10/18/2024 9:50:00 PM Magical and magnificent are your maples of mauve- golden leaves, melding multi shades. All the best dear Nette. Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 10/18/2024 7:42:00 PM What a lovely poem- "Mood's magic brings spell on Maple moments of Fall !" yessss Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 10/18/2024 4:52:00 PM Mauve gold leaves, maple moments - magnificent mashup of words Nette Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 10/18/2024 2:49:00 PM Love the imagery within alliteration! Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 10/18/2024 12:11:00 PM Wow this is magical, and so mesmerizing! Youv got so many elements i like woven in here which makes this easily a personal fave for me! I especially love “ Mauve-gold leaves whirls a dance“ how stunning! “ Moonlight medley enthralls“ just loveee that!!! I think andrea will love this one! Best wishes. Sending you light always Login to Reply