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October.18- 2024

October Symbols- Pleaiades Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

melange of bright colors
makes maple majestic.
most regal, it stands proud.
maroon, brown and orange,
make a kaleidoscope.
mighty grows its grooved trunk
magnificence of Fall.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/3/2024 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on you win. What a lovely "Maples" write for the pretty maple trees. Great Picture... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2024 5:45:00 PM

Very nicely down for maple tree. Congrats, sweet Valsa. Let me tell you something in soupmail

Valsa George
Date: 11/2/2024 8:32:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/19/2024 9:51:00 AM

Dearest Valsa, soulful poet, I love maple trees, especially in Autumn. Your golden pen captures their Fall "magnificence" with poetic finesse. Indeed, the maple, with "it's grooved trunk" is "majestic"! Your use of "M" words is bold and beautiful! Long live the resplendent maple and your exquisite, vibrant poetry! Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2024 6:41:00 AM

Lovely arrangement of words dear Valsa, you are a creative poet that really knows how to portray imagery... Great use of the letter M, with words like melange and most regal... Great use of the form, best of luck in the contest..

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2024 3:05:00 AM

This is an excellent Pleiades, dear Valsa. It should achieve a high placement. You describe maple trees well.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/18/2024 2:23:00 PM

This is different and endearing to everyone who loves maple trees. It is a clever description.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/18/2024 1:23:00 PM

Love the alliteration, especially first two lines, Valsa! Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/18/2024 12:50:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Aren't the maples beautiful this time of year. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/18/2024 12:08:00 PM

you made this tree stand tall with your majestic write, valsa...a poem wc can 't be forgotteh easily! blessings

Ink Empress

Date: 10/18/2024 11:26:00 AM

Dear sweeet valsa, youve captured the magnificent essence of fall that is, maples so eloquently here! I absolutely love how youv written and described maples here, such seamless alliterations and also love how youv written “ makes maple majestic. most regal, it stands proud.“ just stunning and so very descriptive! I think you got the form right! Well done! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/18/2024 11:04:00 AM

Dearest Valsa you have truly captured the majesty of the majestic maple tree with its mighty trunk and melody of colors creating a glorious autumn rainbow. Each carefully chosen word creates a wonderful sense of the essence of the maple tree! It truly is an integral part of the "Magnificence of Fall!" Beautifully done! Best wishes for the contest, dear friend! Sending you blessings of autumn majesty!